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[title] => MY POEM BOOK!!!^_^.....
[time] => 2006-03-02 12:44:02
[hometext] => just another one of my poems .... feel free to comment^_^THIS IS SHORT!!!
[bodytext] => I didn't have no bankbooks and no bluebooks.
I don't like to read books at all.
I went to the brook to think.
I once brought a chapterbook but never read it.
I don't have no checkbooks because I wouldn't be able to keep up with it.
I love cookbooks you can cook al ot of stuff from a cookbook.
I went into the kitchen to cook me some fries.
I don't know what a daybook is.
I once had a fishhook so I could use it to fish with.
I don't think I would be able to look at a book.
I have plenty of notebooks they come in handy.
I used to have to carry around a lot of school books.
I had a yearbook when I was in highschool but that was so long ago.
But the meaning to all of this is some books are okay
But to me books are boring.
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[notes] => Edited for spelling as requested. - Moderator_16
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MY POEM BOOK!!!^_^.....
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butterflygirl40
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Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 12:44:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I didn't have no bankbooks and no bluebooks.
I don't like to read books at all.
I went to the brook to think.
I once brought a chapterbook but never read it.
I don't have no checkbooks because I wouldn't be able to keep up with it.
I love cookbooks you can cook al ot of stuff from a cookbook.
I went into the kitchen to cook me some fries.
I don't know what a daybook is.
I once had a fishhook so I could use it to fish with.
I don't think I would be able to look at a book.
I have plenty of notebooks they come in handy.
I used to have to carry around a lot of school books.
I had a yearbook when I was in highschool but that was so long ago.
But the meaning to all of this is some books are okay
But to me books are boring.
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butterflygirl40
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2006-03-02 12:44:02]
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Re: MY POEM BOOK!!!^_^.....
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by freespirit on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 01:23:22 PM AEST
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hi maybe you should read more book that way you may some day be able to write poetry
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Re: MY POEM BOOK!!!^_^.....
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 02:07:59 PM AEST
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| IF YOU ARE GOING TO COMMENT ME ON ANY OF MY POEMS THEN DONT LEAVE ME A COMMENT LIKE THIS PERSON DID!! CAUSE I THINK THAT WAS VERY RUDE AND COLD HEARTED!!!! ANYWAYS JUST TO LET YOU KNOW IF SOMEONE DOENST LIKE MY POEMS AND WHAT I WRITE THEN DONT LEAVE ME A COMMENT AT ALL.. AND DONT LEAVE ME A COMMENT , WHERE IT SAYS I CANT WRITE POERTY AND I WRITE JUNK .. DO I WRITE JUNK AT LEAST I TRY .. I REALLY DONT SEE NOTHING WRONG WITH WHAT I WRITE AND NO ONE HAS A RIGHT TO JUDGE ME,, SO ALL I ASK IS TO BE NICE AND NOT RUDE LIKE THIS PERSON DID ,, THAT HURT ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:( |
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Re: MY POEM BOOK!!!^_^.....
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 04:18:10 PM AEST
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If you want people to see your poems you have to be able to deal with there response. That's what the comments are for - to critique and break apart poems so the author can become more aware of his or her faults and become a better writer. While you have the right to not be judged, others have the right to free speech. By posting a poem on a public site you risk the chance having comments such as the above being made on your poetry. If you don't like the comments don't post poetry, everyone has their own opinions and are free to express them - much like you are allowed to express yourself through your poetry. If you can't take advice well it may not be the best idea to post your poetry on a site where it allows readers to critique and comment on your poem, as some people are more harsh then others.
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Re: MY POEM BOOK!!!^_^.....
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 04:56:06 PM AEST
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A nice write my friend write what u feel it's you and that's what matters. i enjoyed reading it.
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Re: MY POEM BOOK!!!^_^.....
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 05:45:01 AM AEST
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Dear ButterflyGirl.. I woke up, I heard you.
Comments are opinions. Someone sees a poem from their heart and they speak their mind.
A poem is a poem is a poem.
What is that old saying... you can catch what with what with what
Will a positive or negative comment help out the poet.
We all comment on what we know.
Now, if we want to comment on a poem and play the part of an instructor, so beit.
Does anyone know how to comment, if so, write out how to do it, here with this poem.
Why attack such a beautiful poem.
Could it be somewhere down the road, you may use this poem as an example.
No matter, just read the poem, see it from your heart, and go on.
Positive words are the best. Love each poem as a masterpiece that it is.
After all, the poem was not originated from your heart or mind.
My comment:
Dear Butterflygirl40, your poems contain spontaneity.. in riddles, in rhyme, in several styles unbeknownst to several other poets I have ever read.. in their honest work.. I really love the wisdom that you bestow upon the hearts of man.. they are stunning, punning, tongue twisting riddles, and I sure hope you keep writing, because I for one, your avid reader will be looking in and on to your fine art.
As for any person who comments.. be it yours. Butterflygirl40, go with your heart. By the way, I still like that word Bamboo, you know what I mean.
hugs, raquelLeah
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