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Array ( [sid] => 115687 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => DO NOT GIVE UP [time] => 2006-03-02 10:01:50 [hometext] => written for a special young lady Jennifer who was struggling with anorexia. we supported each other & I am afraid that she succumbed to the illness. [bodytext] => Do Not Give Up..

it is not what"s on the outside
But what’s in the heart,
So don’t give up your struggle
Please do not fall apart.

:Put your life in Gods hand
He will find a way
Do not give up hope
And don’t forget to pray

Just think of all the good things
Forget about the bad,
Try thinking happy thoughts
Instead of thinking sad.

You may be feeling all alone,
You may be sad and blue.
Just remember your redeemer,
He will NOT forsake you..

***************************************

I was in hospital suffering a nervouse breakdown at the time,

Young Jennifer never spoke too much to anybody even her therapist.

she was always sitting alone Here was I overweight 15stone and there was this young lady all skin and bone. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 19 [informant] => dougnut [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

DO NOT GIVE UP

Contributed by dougnut on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 10:01:50 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Do Not Give Up..

it is not what"s on the outside
But what’s in the heart,
So don’t give up your struggle
Please do not fall apart.

:Put your life in Gods hand
He will find a way
Do not give up hope
And don’t forget to pray

Just think of all the good things
Forget about the bad,
Try thinking happy thoughts
Instead of thinking sad.

You may be feeling all alone,
You may be sad and blue.
Just remember your redeemer,
He will NOT forsake you..

***************************************

I was in hospital suffering a nervouse breakdown at the time,

Young Jennifer never spoke too much to anybody even her therapist.

she was always sitting alone Here was I overweight 15stone and there was this young lady all skin and bone.

Copyright Â© dougnut ... [ 2006-03-02 10:01:50]
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Re: DO NOT GIVE UP (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 12:47:34 PM AEST
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Awwwwwww this is so sad ,, I hope things '
get better for you both.. I dont know if this is a sign of a nerves breakdown are not but alot of times I see things that isnt there. and no one else see's it .. just wondering..
GOD BLESS YOU BOTH.. and keep writing..

Re: DO NOT GIVE UP (User Rating: 1 )
by Nothingness on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 09:41:33 PM AEST
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wow that was great i am really glad you had me read that i think because you believe in "god" so stongly i may try to find him as well thank you so much

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