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Array ( [sid] => 115683 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bad people go to hell [time] => 2006-03-02 07:20:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => every web spun with intricacy
each move, each step, all planned carefully
each word they speak hold more than what it means
each verb, each noun, it is not all clean

and soon they will be ready
attack steps are so steady
It burns heart, it spills gut
all into a great inferno

boil, boil, boil
boil and let it vaporise into nothingness
but they don't take risks
they let the fire rage on

burning
the base turns black
before they relent
and throw all attachments
relations
associations
away.

Deny all involvements
perhaps say some prayers
a last half life of hide and seek
let light shine so brightly
to blind their past
and avoid suspicion

Congratulations
they suceeded
they've achieved
death without a jail term

but.
bad people go to hell [comments] => 2 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 43 [informant] => glassicallyunsuperficial [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Bad people go to hell

Contributed by glassicallyunsuperficial on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 07:20:24 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

every web spun with intricacy
each move, each step, all planned carefully
each word they speak hold more than what it means
each verb, each noun, it is not all clean

and soon they will be ready
attack steps are so steady
It burns heart, it spills gut
all into a great inferno

boil, boil, boil
boil and let it vaporise into nothingness
but they don't take risks
they let the fire rage on

burning
the base turns black
before they relent
and throw all attachments
relations
associations
away.

Deny all involvements
perhaps say some prayers
a last half life of hide and seek
let light shine so brightly
to blind their past
and avoid suspicion

Congratulations
they suceeded
they've achieved
death without a jail term

but.
bad people go to hell

Copyright © glassicallyunsuperficial ... [ 2006-03-02 07:20:24]
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Re: Bad people go to hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 08:40:24 AM AEST
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I think you have written well here. I do feel a touch of possible satire in this write, and I certainly hope this is how it is. For it is not bad people who go to hell. We are all bad people. Bad people go to heaven as well, atleast this is in line with my faith and spiritual acceptance. What sends us to hell is lack of faith, and lack of knowledge that we all fall short of the glory of God. And in my belief the denial of Christ.

Good write, though I am not in total agreement.

- SCM

Re: Bad people go to hell (User Rating: 1 )
by twick on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 02:11:26 PM AEST
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i liked the assonance in the first stanza the best. the rest kind of fizzled for me. Still not bad.

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