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Array ( [sid] => 115677 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I CANNOT LET YOU GO- [time] => 2006-03-02 02:05:23 [hometext] => JUST GOING THROUGH THE EMOTIONS OF LOOSING SOMEONE I LOVE-IT HURTS [bodytext] => all alone off in the air
I gaze and stare
in a trance I see
a world so lonely
for my heart aches now
not understanding why or how?
I cannot let you go-
an imperfect relationship-
an imperfect man
yet I almost cant bare the pain
of letting you walk away
I cannot decide what I want or what is right
I thought I Knew all the answers but as I sit here tonight?
I do not know how to say goodbye
for the aches and pains burn inside
standing at the top of the mountain
as I take one last deep breath within
before completely emotionally breaking down
I stand tall and proud
as the wind gently blows
through my fine thin hair
and in the direction of the wind I stare
with my skirt flowing gracefully
in this gentle breeze
the wind sings me a sweet lullaby
to comfort my broken down cry
humming with the wind, I am comforted within
I still don’t know where to go
deep down inside I feel I know
a choice I might not get
for me, I fear you will reject
so in the silence of the wind
begging and pleading I begin
that god would either soften your heart
or send me away and send me afar
but to sit here with the pain
and to sit here in un-deciding
hurts beyond any other pain
its like being punched in the stomach
when I feel like throwing up
I feel as if I have large soars bleeding with in
and the crying is only enhancing the pain
goodbye I cannot say
I don’t know how to go my way
I don’t know how you cope or if your even in pain?
or how you can move on
and just leave this love alone
goodbye? I need help this is my cry
that I might find hope in another guy-
walking off the mountain now
still unresolved and don’t know why or how?
but one thing I do know
you have stole the key to my soul
and I cannot let you go-
shanna01-28-06 [comments] => 4 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Adelle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I CANNOT LET YOU GO-

Contributed by Adelle on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 02:05:23 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

all alone off in the air
I gaze and stare
in a trance I see
a world so lonely
for my heart aches now
not understanding why or how?
I cannot let you go-
an imperfect relationship-
an imperfect man
yet I almost cant bare the pain
of letting you walk away
I cannot decide what I want or what is right
I thought I Knew all the answers but as I sit here tonight?
I do not know how to say goodbye
for the aches and pains burn inside
standing at the top of the mountain
as I take one last deep breath within
before completely emotionally breaking down
I stand tall and proud
as the wind gently blows
through my fine thin hair
and in the direction of the wind I stare
with my skirt flowing gracefully
in this gentle breeze
the wind sings me a sweet lullaby
to comfort my broken down cry
humming with the wind, I am comforted within
I still don’t know where to go
deep down inside I feel I know
a choice I might not get
for me, I fear you will reject
so in the silence of the wind
begging and pleading I begin
that god would either soften your heart
or send me away and send me afar
but to sit here with the pain
and to sit here in un-deciding
hurts beyond any other pain
its like being punched in the stomach
when I feel like throwing up
I feel as if I have large soars bleeding with in
and the crying is only enhancing the pain
goodbye I cannot say
I don’t know how to go my way
I don’t know how you cope or if your even in pain?
or how you can move on
and just leave this love alone
goodbye? I need help this is my cry
that I might find hope in another guy-
walking off the mountain now
still unresolved and don’t know why or how?
but one thing I do know
you have stole the key to my soul
and I cannot let you go-
shanna01-28-06

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Re: I CANNOT LET YOU GO- (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 06:20:10 AM AEST
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nice write :-)

Re: I CANNOT LET YOU GO- (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 09:09:08 AM AEST
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I feel your heart burn.. I really do.. raquelLeah

Re: I CANNOT LET YOU GO- (User Rating: 1 )
by dougnut on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 10:07:38 AM AEST
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SHANNA,

I can feel the pain and the emotion in this

heartfelt write of yours sad read but great

poetry

thanks for sharing this with us.

Dougnut

Re: I CANNOT LET YOU GO- (User Rating: 1 )
by felicitous on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 06:54:33 AM AEST
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i understand. i feel you. i'll remember other lost loves through my tears

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