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Directives not written in stone,
Decisions made sub conscience and alone,
Stars cosmically, overhead in a dome,
Future mistakes a constant unknown,

Opened mouth without a doubt,
Unthought spoken words which just spill out,
Sometimes wise, sometimes felt,
A simple slip, words can shout,

Regretted speech, maybe yes or maybe no,
The truth does hurt, or so I m told,
Can one be to blunt? or be to bold?
Should one hide? Should one fold?

Rest assure we learn from our mistakes,
Sometimes once, or two takes,
The cosmic sledgehammer does not hesitate,
To slam thy down, to make you wake,

With every blow, we shall learn,
With every blow, respect we’ll earn,
With every blow, the past will burn,
With every blow, we get a new turn,

So hop right on and take a ride,
The past will hurt, but it will subside,
Learn from our mistakes, no tears, no cries,
Learn from the past, from the hammer,
Cause the Cosmic Sledgehammer is on your side..........

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Cosmic Sledgehammer

Contributed by macgyver_dk on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 01:22:27 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Cosmic Sledgehammer

Directives not written in stone,
Decisions made sub conscience and alone,
Stars cosmically, overhead in a dome,
Future mistakes a constant unknown,

Opened mouth without a doubt,
Unthought spoken words which just spill out,
Sometimes wise, sometimes felt,
A simple slip, words can shout,

Regretted speech, maybe yes or maybe no,
The truth does hurt, or so I m told,
Can one be to blunt? or be to bold?
Should one hide? Should one fold?

Rest assure we learn from our mistakes,
Sometimes once, or two takes,
The cosmic sledgehammer does not hesitate,
To slam thy down, to make you wake,

With every blow, we shall learn,
With every blow, respect we’ll earn,
With every blow, the past will burn,
With every blow, we get a new turn,

So hop right on and take a ride,
The past will hurt, but it will subside,
Learn from our mistakes, no tears, no cries,
Learn from the past, from the hammer,
Cause the Cosmic Sledgehammer is on your side..........

Copyright Â© macgyver_dk ... [ 2006-03-02 01:22:27]
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Re: Cosmic Sledgehammer (User Rating: 1 )
by grin69 on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 03:03:01 AM AEST
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WOW!!! I love, love, love this poem!!! So the "Cosmic Sledgehammer" is GOD? This is th best poem I've read tonight.

Re: Cosmic Sledgehammer (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 06:00:02 AM AEST
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well done, a joy to read.

Re: Cosmic Sledgehammer (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 06:26:12 AM AEST
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excellent write, enjoyed it a lot, thanx for sharing :-)

Re: Cosmic Sledgehammer (User Rating: 1 )
by BSteel on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 07:11:45 AM AEST
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i gotta say wow, thanks for sharing that
beyoned well done that is rare!
Sincerly,
Bsteel

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