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Array ( [sid] => 115584 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I've Made No Mistake [time] => 2006-02-28 18:18:51 [hometext] => ~a writing from early highschool that I stumbled across(oh how there is nothing like self-deception)~weepingprophet [bodytext] => Do you really love me?
You solemnly claim to
Should I trust you?
I have nothing else to do

I am a skeptic
When it comes to love
You are perfect
An honest gift from above

When I look in the mirror
Baby you have nothing to compare
To the sheer terror
Of the monster that I see there

I recall everything bad
That I have ever done
I remember, regretfully
The times I held that gun

I know you cannot comprehend
This abhor against myself
I own lament that I cannot mend
A past I can't put on a shelf

Life is empty like this
There's nothing I can say
Dwelling on truth's last kiss
I know for sure I love you today

I cannot promise forever
Broken promises I don't make
Yet I know what's in my heart
And I've made no mistake
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 319 [topic] => 21 [informant] => weepingprophet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

I've Made No Mistake

Contributed by weepingprophet on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 06:18:51 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Do you really love me?
You solemnly claim to
Should I trust you?
I have nothing else to do

I am a skeptic
When it comes to love
You are perfect
An honest gift from above

When I look in the mirror
Baby you have nothing to compare
To the sheer terror
Of the monster that I see there

I recall everything bad
That I have ever done
I remember, regretfully
The times I held that gun

I know you cannot comprehend
This abhor against myself
I own lament that I cannot mend
A past I can't put on a shelf

Life is empty like this
There's nothing I can say
Dwelling on truth's last kiss
I know for sure I love you today

I cannot promise forever
Broken promises I don't make
Yet I know what's in my heart
And I've made no mistake

Copyright © weepingprophet ... [ 2006-02-28 18:18:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I've Made No Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 06:55:02 PM AEST
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well done

Re: I've Made No Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by boobiepeach on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:14:57 PM AEST
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i love to go back and find old notbooks from highschool and things i have written long ago.
its always nice to look back at feeling you thought were so strong or maybe still are
great write

peach

Re: I've Made No Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by funnyface on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 08:41:58 PM AEST
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FINDING POEMS YOU HAD FORGOTTEN ABOUT IS LIKE FINDING YOURSELF ALL OVER AGAIN
THAT TIME HAS PUT ON HOLD . GREAT WRITE
THANKS FOR SHARING.

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