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Array ( [sid] => 115556 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Plastic [time] => 2006-02-28 02:32:55 [hometext] => A simple poem about a girl who looks perfect and yet feels dead, excuse my spelling and/or grammar. [bodytext] => You look in the mirror,
What do you see?
A fake image,
...So ugly...
Put on a smile,
You stupid *****,
A perfect picture,
...So pathetic...

They all watch,
What you wish you could be.
They all believe,
What you want them to see.

I'll watch you melt,
I'll watch you die.
I know how you felt,
I know when you cry.
And when you wilt,
You're so plastic.

You're too empty,
Dead inside.
Another scar on your arm,
...So soulless...
Hurting all over,
From your stupid lies.
A simple mistake,
...So betrayed...

They all watch,
As you scream.
They all believe,
As you dream.

I'll watch you melt,
I'll watch you die.
I know how you felt,
I know when you cry.
And when you wilt,
You're so plastic.

Go ahead... Cry,
No one can hear you,
Not a soul even cares,
...So delusioned...
Don't tell them a thing,
Hide behind your lies.
Run far away,
...So lost...

They all watch,
What you wish you could be.
They all believe,
What you want them to see.

I'll watch you melt,
I'll watch you die.
I know how you felt,
I know when you cry.
And when you wilt,
You're so plastic.

...Fade away...
I'll watch you die,
Around all your deceit,
You're so plastic.
I'll watch you melt,
Under the heat,
You're so plastic... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 376 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Karlee14 [notes] => .....edited for banned word...by mod_6....28-02-06 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Plastic

Contributed by Karlee14 on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 02:32:55 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

You look in the mirror,
What do you see?
A fake image,
...So ugly...
Put on a smile,
You stupid *****,
A perfect picture,
...So pathetic...

They all watch,
What you wish you could be.
They all believe,
What you want them to see.

I'll watch you melt,
I'll watch you die.
I know how you felt,
I know when you cry.
And when you wilt,
You're so plastic.

You're too empty,
Dead inside.
Another scar on your arm,
...So soulless...
Hurting all over,
From your stupid lies.
A simple mistake,
...So betrayed...

They all watch,
As you scream.
They all believe,
As you dream.

I'll watch you melt,
I'll watch you die.
I know how you felt,
I know when you cry.
And when you wilt,
You're so plastic.

Go ahead... Cry,
No one can hear you,
Not a soul even cares,
...So delusioned...
Don't tell them a thing,
Hide behind your lies.
Run far away,
...So lost...

They all watch,
What you wish you could be.
They all believe,
What you want them to see.

I'll watch you melt,
I'll watch you die.
I know how you felt,
I know when you cry.
And when you wilt,
You're so plastic.

...Fade away...
I'll watch you die,
Around all your deceit,
You're so plastic.
I'll watch you melt,
Under the heat,
You're so plastic...

Copyright © Karlee14 ... [ 2006-02-28 02:32:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Plastic (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 03:37:26 AM AEST
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Haunting poetry full of emotion.
Greetz,
Hur

Re: Plastic (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 06:36:17 AM AEST
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people seem to think that if your pretty, lifes a breeze for ya, life aint a breeze for anyone.
good emotive, thought provoking poem thanx for sharing :-)

Re: Plastic (User Rating: 1 )
by ale5shr on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 09:26:55 AM AEST
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very thought provoking. liked it really did. most people seem plastic to me. As you said "You're so plastic"

Re: Plastic (User Rating: 1 )
by ale5shr on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 09:26:57 AM AEST
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very thought provoking. liked it really did. most people seem plastic to me. As you said "You're so plastic"

Re: Plastic (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 10:47:57 AM AEST
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Intense, poweful. Captivating the essance of many today. Your style carried it along .

Michelle

Re: Plastic (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimberlynn on Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 02:20:17 PM AEST
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Yeah, Its so deep....I love it.

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