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No...
You promised you weren't ever going to leave me then you hand me some stupid story and take off.

Numb and cold. I'm sorry. I wasted time...
Time that wasn't mine.

But strange thing is, I wouldn't give it back even if I could. Those moments were special but obviously not good enough for you.

Engagment lost among other things. Losing hope...
Losing blood...
Lost in you...
In the memories.

As I lay,
still loving you so very dearly, my depression speaks to me.

Goodbye to happiness, for my heart has been raped once again.

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Your False Promise

Contributed by Holli on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 09:52:19 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You said,
No...
You promised you weren't ever going to leave me then you hand me some stupid story and take off.

Numb and cold. I'm sorry. I wasted time...
Time that wasn't mine.

But strange thing is, I wouldn't give it back even if I could. Those moments were special but obviously not good enough for you.

Engagment lost among other things. Losing hope...
Losing blood...
Lost in you...
In the memories.

As I lay,
still loving you so very dearly, my depression speaks to me.

Goodbye to happiness, for my heart has been raped once again.

Copyright © Holli ... [ 2006-02-27 21:52:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Your False Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by eggflipper on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 11:17:38 PM AEST
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Even stranger, you'd do it all over again just to feel that once again, no. The pain certainly uplifts the pleasure.

Re: Your False Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by bethers_is_my_baby on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:20:44 PM AEST
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nice work here, I understand exactly how you feel.

PEACE

Re: Your False Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by Froggy on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 10:52:15 AM AEST
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I've had the same thing...only after being told that i would have to leave them, because they would never break up with me in their life....

Great Write....

Re: Your False Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by Redhotchilichic on Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 10:13:52 AM AEST
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This was really good work, well written. Good job!

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