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Array ( [sid] => 115532 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken [time] => 2006-02-27 20:15:26 [hometext] => I return to my dark side, I can never leave it for long [bodytext] => I am broken.
So forsake me, I care not for this life.
I have delved deep into my soul,
and found nothing left.
these are endless battles I have lost.

I am undone.
So deliver me of my weariness,
and end my sorry plight
my heart like a shard of glass
is shattered from within.

It is over.
and the fruitlessness of my quest
only just realized
so finish what was begun
and release me of my chains
and I'll fall to me knees in redemption. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 75 [informant] => thesinner [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Broken

Contributed by thesinner on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:15:26 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

I am broken.
So forsake me, I care not for this life.
I have delved deep into my soul,
and found nothing left.
these are endless battles I have lost.

I am undone.
So deliver me of my weariness,
and end my sorry plight
my heart like a shard of glass
is shattered from within.

It is over.
and the fruitlessness of my quest
only just realized
so finish what was begun
and release me of my chains
and I'll fall to me knees in redemption.

Copyright © thesinner ... [ 2006-02-27 20:15:26]
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Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:27:12 PM AEST
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this is a kick ass poem.its soo kool.i love dark .the dark will prevail over all muhahahahahahahaahahaha!
sorry:)
little carryed away but well done loved it

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by eggflipper on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:43:59 PM AEST
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Emotion always gets in the way of love. Is it really release from the chains you want?

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by eggflipper on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:44:48 PM AEST
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it's beautiful. Full of emotion. Sadly, I get it.

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 10:49:27 PM AEST
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Yes, let go, and let God.. free ourselves from harm..

raquelLeah

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by OzChick on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 02:05:42 AM AEST
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I agree with Crazy, this is a kick ass poem. I like it.

~Jenny~

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 11:12:02 AM AEST
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Incredible! This write moved me in more ways than one.
Michelle

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