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Going Threw It
Contributed by
Lenore_Poe15
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Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 04:59:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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go to sleep early just so I can see your face.
Wake up in the morning thinking I'll see you today.
Remebering that I'm in hell the toture begins hoping that
I'll see you again. For that is what keeps me alive and
if I see you never, than I shall go threw hell over and over.
Till I see your face once more and I see it then and forever
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Lenore_Poe15
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2006-02-27 16:59:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Going Threw It
(User Rating: 1 ) by Faust on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 05:47:35 PM AEST (User
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good spelling or not kitsune I'm sure everyone will understand it... Another great poem from you and hopefully one of many you'll share.
Love,
Tanuki |
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Re: Going Threw It
(User Rating: 1 ) by crazy on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 07:09:31 PM AEST (User
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hey dont worry i cant spell neither.kool poem i like it alot.
i like the last few lines
"if i see you never,then i shall go threw hell over and over.Till i see your face once more and i see it then and forever."
this is the best.nice job |
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Re: Going Threw It
(User Rating: 1 ) by DieRomantic on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:16:35 PM AEST (User
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I like this a lot. Short, but meangful. Good write =] |
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