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Memories make Me
Contributed by
Caviglia
on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 11:46:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Who will staunch this lachrymal stream?
Provide a tender tourniquet to end this torrent of melancholy blankness.
Forgotten sobriquets stirred like silt by your
Dredging, diving, digging.
Feeling for feelings.
Suppressed by sediment,
They lie like the lives you have taken,
Clouded by time
At the bottom of this bastardied interment
In turn.
You will float.
In limbo.
Like the stench of death you wrought,
Caressed by the blade without thought.
Copyright ©
Caviglia
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2006-02-27 11:46:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Memories make Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:02:51 PM AEST (User
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well done , i like some of the wording that you used. |
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Re: Memories make Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 10:27:32 PM AEST (User
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This is excellent work. The metaphor's powerful, and your wording is admirable. Personally, I prefer the more staid and pithy effect of Anglo-Saxon word choices to this more, should I say flashy, Latinic style, but it's done with much success here, and it's good to read something different. Bravo!
Andrew |
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