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CHIT CHAT and then let?s
Freeze this moment still as night
Finish the glass of your black heroin
And replace it completely
With half and half
Done and captured
But why remember
Who will ***** remember
Develop the postcard
And scratch your beaten head
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A Flash From Behind

Contributed by GarishGinsberg on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:27:58 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

A Flash From Behind

CHIT CHAT and then let?s
Freeze this moment still as night
Finish the glass of your black heroin
And replace it completely
With half and half
Done and captured
But why remember
Who will ***** remember
Develop the postcard
And scratch your beaten head

Copyright © GarishGinsberg ... [ 2006-02-27 00:27:58]
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Re: A Flash From Behind (User Rating: 1 )
by eggflipper on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:39:12 AM AEST
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not sure of what you are saying here. What is the role of postcard here. I'm thinking this is the key.

Re: A Flash From Behind (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 02:13:39 AM AEST
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Interesting piece which I've read over several times now....trying to grasp it's meaning. Would so love to know your thought processes here in this piece.

I saw this: Anger at someone who seems to be drowning in themselves, forgetting those that are there waiting on the side lines.

Could be miles off on this one. Again would love to know more about this piece. PM me please. Peace, Laura

Re: A Flash From Behind (User Rating: 1 )
by themonk on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:40:34 AM AEST
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hmmm, great style, yet very Allen Ginsberg like. The ideas run smoothly, add some more originallity and you will produce masterpieces.

much love "the Monk"

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