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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Dear Daddy
[time] => 2006-02-26 23:11:55
[hometext] => I don't want to say anything about this one... it's too sad...
[bodytext] => Dear Daddy,
I'm sorry I'm your problem
I'm sorry I'm not eighteen
I'm sorry for trying to help you
Before Jackie joins in the scene
I'm sorry I don't fit into your puzzle
I'm the accidental piece
I shouldn't have been in your box
Because then all the problems would cease
You wouldn't have married mommy
You'd have been perfectly happy with Paige
Or Pat would come over more often
Not fearing my "silent rage"
I'm sorry I've been such a burden
Asking for a dad all the time
I'm sorry I couldn't be perfect
Without flaws of any kind
I'm sorry my sister agrees
That she can see it too
All the things I tell you to change
She also asks that of you
I'm sorry that she won't talk to you
Just like she talks to me
But see she's so afraid
Of how strong your anger can be
I'm sorry, dear daddy, I'm sorry
That I've told you the truth
I can't stop what i see
Through the eyes of an innocent youth
I'm sorry, oh so sorry
That I awnted to make things ok
I'm sorry I wanted us happy
Now I'm alone, sobbing away
I'm sorry Daddy
[comments] => 11
[counter] => 326
[topic] => 5
[informant] => Kie-Kie
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 24
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => ChildrensPoetry
)
Dear Daddy
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 11:11:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Dear Daddy,
I'm sorry I'm your problem
I'm sorry I'm not eighteen
I'm sorry for trying to help you
Before Jackie joins in the scene
I'm sorry I don't fit into your puzzle
I'm the accidental piece
I shouldn't have been in your box
Because then all the problems would cease
You wouldn't have married mommy
You'd have been perfectly happy with Paige
Or Pat would come over more often
Not fearing my "silent rage"
I'm sorry I've been such a burden
Asking for a dad all the time
I'm sorry I couldn't be perfect
Without flaws of any kind
I'm sorry my sister agrees
That she can see it too
All the things I tell you to change
She also asks that of you
I'm sorry that she won't talk to you
Just like she talks to me
But see she's so afraid
Of how strong your anger can be
I'm sorry, dear daddy, I'm sorry
That I've told you the truth
I can't stop what i see
Through the eyes of an innocent youth
I'm sorry, oh so sorry
That I awnted to make things ok
I'm sorry I wanted us happy
Now I'm alone, sobbing away
I'm sorry Daddy
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2006-02-26 23:11:55]
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Re: Dear Daddy
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 11:22:49 PM AEST
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wow kie this is very sad.. but a beautiful write.. hang in there (if this is about you) this is very sad and very expressive. your not a problem. but i can relate to this in a sense. great job
JENNI |
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Re: Dear Daddy
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by fake_emptyness on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 11:37:36 PM AEST
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| i wish i knew what to say... this left me crying and feeling empty....very powerful and meaningful.... |
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Re: Dear Daddy
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 11:44:30 PM AEST
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Oh Kiela...
This made me feel so sad for you. I know how hard it is having a dad that doesn't see things the same way. I know how much it can hurt.
Please though, don't be sorry, because you are wonderful as you are, and no one should have to apologise for being themselves.
You're a beautiful person and don't you forget it. We can see it, I hope you can too.
Stop being so hard on yourself, yeah? You can't please everyone, and no one is perfect.
Love ya sweetie. (You and your wonderful flaws (They make you beautiful) )
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Dear Daddy
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by secretwind on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:11:44 AM AEST
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| this is so sad... |
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Re: Dear Daddy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 05:38:55 PM AEST
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| wow, i...I don't think I'll ever smile again after reading that, it was so sad and..POOP! HAH! That made me smile :D |
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Re: Dear Daddy
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by Tiffyo4 on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 08:49:00 PM AEST
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wow that was good stuff i feel how strong the words are in htis peom never stop writing
tiff |
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Re: Dear Daddy
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by Tiffyo4 on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 08:53:20 PM AEST
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wow that was good stuff i feel how strong the words are in htis peom never stop writing
tiff |
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Re: Dear Daddy
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by Tiffyo4 on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 08:53:20 PM AEST
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wow that was good stuff i feel how strong the words are in htis peom never stop writing
tiff |
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Re: Dear Daddy
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 08:04:07 PM AEST
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This is an incredibly sad piece but it is brilliantly written. Isn't it unfortunate that such sad things inspire one to write something so well?
Anywho.....
*huge hug* Kiela
I really do hope that someday it gets better for you and sis.
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Dear Daddy
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 01:33:32 AM AEST
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It is very sad indeed. well written keep it up.
FRANCO. |
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Re: Dear Daddy
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 01:36:19 AM AEST
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Very well written, it is unfortunate that this is happening to you, it's just the opposite here. So sad too.
sadaddy |
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