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Array ( [sid] => 115461 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I fell for you [time] => 2006-02-26 20:44:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Throw a stare across the room
Make a reason meet its doom
Loosing balance i'm falling soon

In minus time your thoughts came through
I lost sense i fell for you
You tricked me in a game for two
And i fell in a word gone new

Worst than Love it's worst than Love
And purer than the pale pale moon
And deeper than a flame gone cool
You jinxed my heart
I fell for you

No obssesion can compare
No desire can it dare
Like a madman's secret lair
It's a sane called loon
It's a bubble burst in June
Tell me what sense does it tell?

But it's hotter than hell!
However sweet
As your eyes still tune

Away i'm trapped
In my spirit's crimson cell
My crime was a rhyme
And tell me if it's fair
And all because
I came across your stare

You tricked me in a game for two
I lost sense
And i fell for you. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 2 [informant] => aliengirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I fell for you

Contributed by aliengirl on Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 08:44:26 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Throw a stare across the room
Make a reason meet its doom
Loosing balance i'm falling soon

In minus time your thoughts came through
I lost sense i fell for you
You tricked me in a game for two
And i fell in a word gone new

Worst than Love it's worst than Love
And purer than the pale pale moon
And deeper than a flame gone cool
You jinxed my heart
I fell for you

No obssesion can compare
No desire can it dare
Like a madman's secret lair
It's a sane called loon
It's a bubble burst in June
Tell me what sense does it tell?

But it's hotter than hell!
However sweet
As your eyes still tune

Away i'm trapped
In my spirit's crimson cell
My crime was a rhyme
And tell me if it's fair
And all because
I came across your stare

You tricked me in a game for two
I lost sense
And i fell for you.

Copyright © aliengirl ... [ 2006-02-26 20:44:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I fell for you (User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 08:48:56 PM AEST
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AMAZING! I loved this poem! It flowed so well, conveyed so much emotion, and i could relate! MASTERPEICE! great write.

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