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Array ( [sid] => 115429 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dying for perfection [time] => 2006-02-26 07:09:43 [hometext] => i think if u read this poem its pretty obvious wat its bout tell me wat u think k [bodytext] => No wonder i cant stop crying, My lifes a living hell,
I just want to die, get away from it all,
Away from this world, so cruel and unforgiving,
lying in bed, as i write poems shivering,

All my old mates, call to see if im ok,
But they dont understand, how im feeling today,
There lives are so perfect, why cant mine be to,
Thats all i want perfection, its so far overdue,

This hospitals so boring, everythings so white,
I hate being forcefed, through a tube everynight,
The looks on the faces, of my parents and friends,
They know that im dying, but they still pretend,

That everythings ok, when they know that its not,
just let me go already, its what i need, what i want. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 61 [informant] => -why_not_let_me_live- [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Dying for perfection

Contributed by -why_not_let_me_live- on Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 07:09:43 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

No wonder i cant stop crying, My lifes a living hell,
I just want to die, get away from it all,
Away from this world, so cruel and unforgiving,
lying in bed, as i write poems shivering,

All my old mates, call to see if im ok,
But they dont understand, how im feeling today,
There lives are so perfect, why cant mine be to,
Thats all i want perfection, its so far overdue,

This hospitals so boring, everythings so white,
I hate being forcefed, through a tube everynight,
The looks on the faces, of my parents and friends,
They know that im dying, but they still pretend,

That everythings ok, when they know that its not,
just let me go already, its what i need, what i want.

Copyright © -why_not_let_me_live- ... [ 2006-02-26 07:09:43]
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Re: Dying for perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by happybunnyfan on Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 12:37:55 PM AEST
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Great write, so in depth, you could paint a picture with your words. Hope you keep writting like this.

Re: Dying for perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 04:57:47 PM AEST
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great write, really deep, i hope it's not true though....

~natalya

Re: Dying for perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by -why_not_let_me_live- on Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 07:41:34 AM AEST
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if u like dis poem y nit check out the other 2 ive got on this site daddys lil girl and this cruel world and beyond thanx 4 the comment s i really appriciate them they help me become a better poet and keep writing

thanx again all mi love

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