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Array ( [sid] => 115382 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love through steel [time] => 2006-02-25 09:46:45 [hometext] => i do no consider this one of my best but i like it its simple easy to read please comment i live offf them [bodytext] => I want to hustle for your love,
I'm no scrub, I'm no punk,
I want to hustle for your love,

I don't mean to rush
such is such,
I want to be there in the clutch,
I want to hustle for your love,

I'm crowded and I'm crushed,
I'm broke and I'm flushed,
Labled and stuck, still I try so much,
I want to hustle for your love,

I know a day will come,
Where sins will be atoned,
for heaven is my home,
till then I gotta keep going,
from among the posers, I was chosen,
and I'm still moving roses,
just under the noses,
of all that oppose this,
still I know what my role is,
as I make power moves,
grinding in my dreams,
moving at rapid speed,
it all seems a dream,
till reality brings me to my knees,
till that day comes,
I want hustle for your love. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 339 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Bsteel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Love through steel

Contributed by Bsteel on Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 09:46:45 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I want to hustle for your love,
I'm no scrub, I'm no punk,
I want to hustle for your love,

I don't mean to rush
such is such,
I want to be there in the clutch,
I want to hustle for your love,

I'm crowded and I'm crushed,
I'm broke and I'm flushed,
Labled and stuck, still I try so much,
I want to hustle for your love,

I know a day will come,
Where sins will be atoned,
for heaven is my home,
till then I gotta keep going,
from among the posers, I was chosen,
and I'm still moving roses,
just under the noses,
of all that oppose this,
still I know what my role is,
as I make power moves,
grinding in my dreams,
moving at rapid speed,
it all seems a dream,
till reality brings me to my knees,
till that day comes,
I want hustle for your love.

Copyright © Bsteel ... [ 2006-02-25 09:46:45]
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Re: Love through steel (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 09:48:53 AM AEST
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well done

Re: Love through steel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 10:17:06 AM AEST
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Great job! Way too modern in the wording for my taste, I fear. Still I have a sincere admiration in your flow and your total work here.

Good Job!

- SCM

Re: Love through steel (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 12:24:17 PM AEST
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i love this style i dont really know how to write like this but its so well put together.the way it all fits together is amazing.
well done

Re: Love through steel (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 04:16:11 PM AEST
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a different style but I liked it.
Michelle

Re: Love through steel (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 08:33:21 AM AEST
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interesting style good write

NS

Re: Love through steel (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken-Suicide on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 10:52:34 AM AEST
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I'm crowded and I'm crushed,
I'm broke and I'm flushed,
Labled and stuck, still I try so much,
for heaven is my home,
till then I gotta keep going,

Absoulutly true. So far ive noticed your want to give in to it but knowing you gotta keep survivng.

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