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This is how I deal
This is my shame
This is exactly how I feel

I have no idea
How else to express
I have no clue
How to supress
All these feelings
No exception of hate
My minds always reeling
That is my own fate

Fearing having time
To sit back and think
Not knowing why
I'm the only problem
Wanting to please and comply
***** it up everytime

Just to get yelled at
I'm such a spoiled brat
It makes some sense
From the angle I'm at
I'm not so incredible
I'm not so amazing
My heart walls are penetrable
So you set your guns blazing

You saw the tears in my eyes
No sympathy still
It seemed rather heartless
"Fire at will"

I took it all in
Let you break me down
Looked at all my sins
As my blood and tears hit the ground

I thought it over
In my head
Attempting to let it go
Release the words you said

This is my game
This is how I deal
This is my shame
This is exactly how I feel [comments] => 2 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 65 [informant] => SmileSkinDeep [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

This Is...

Contributed by SmileSkinDeep on Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 12:13:09 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

This is my game
This is how I deal
This is my shame
This is exactly how I feel

I have no idea
How else to express
I have no clue
How to supress
All these feelings
No exception of hate
My minds always reeling
That is my own fate

Fearing having time
To sit back and think
Not knowing why
I'm the only problem
Wanting to please and comply
***** it up everytime

Just to get yelled at
I'm such a spoiled brat
It makes some sense
From the angle I'm at
I'm not so incredible
I'm not so amazing
My heart walls are penetrable
So you set your guns blazing

You saw the tears in my eyes
No sympathy still
It seemed rather heartless
"Fire at will"

I took it all in
Let you break me down
Looked at all my sins
As my blood and tears hit the ground

I thought it over
In my head
Attempting to let it go
Release the words you said

This is my game
This is how I deal
This is my shame
This is exactly how I feel

Copyright Â© SmileSkinDeep ... [ 2006-02-25 00:13:09]
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Re: This Is... (User Rating: 1 )
by eggflipper on Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 12:23:37 AM AEST
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Ìf anything, a poem should be honest. Emotions don`t lie, people descibing them do. It`s honest, its raw, it is exactly how it should be.

Re: This Is... (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 12:35:54 AM AEST
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I agree with eggflipper up there, honest, and that's what makes it as great as it really is.

~natalya

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