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[sid] => 115360
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Too Late
[time] => 2006-02-24 23:54:56
[hometext] => something a lot lighter than usual, but still real. Tell me what you think
[bodytext] => Come on
Walk through me,
I know you can
You can't see me,
That's ok
You never have before either
Come on,
Tune me out,
I know it's easy,
You're a pro
Come on,
Look right past me,
I'm invisible, I know
A chameleon, transparant
But you'll see me again
You will
Come on,
Use me,
For your selfish needs
I know you want to
You need to,
You have no one else
Feel my skin,
Steal my heart,
I dare you
Ha, I know you can't
It's too late now
You've missed your chance
You still walked through me,
When i was real,
Remember?
You tuned me out,
When you could still
Hear me
You didn't see me,
Even when I was right there,
Next to you
You stole my heart
Once upon a time,
But forgot to give it back
Too bad you never realized you had it
Might've done something with it,
Well, now i took it back myself
And you used me,
One too many times,
So you can't anymore
Because,
Guess what,
You've lost me
You cant see me
you can't hear me
you can't feel me
I'm dead to you,
And if you don't mind,
I'd like to keep it that way
I mean, there's only
A limited amount of times you can screw me over,
Before i start to dig your grave, right?
[comments] => 14
[counter] => 390
[topic] => 22
[informant] => drtylilsecret
[notes] => Poem edited as requested in 'Site Help' - Moderator_16
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 23
[ratings] => 6
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LostLove
)
Too Late
Contributed by
drtylilsecret
on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 11:54:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Come on
Walk through me,
I know you can
You can't see me,
That's ok
You never have before either
Come on,
Tune me out,
I know it's easy,
You're a pro
Come on,
Look right past me,
I'm invisible, I know
A chameleon, transparant
But you'll see me again
You will
Come on,
Use me,
For your selfish needs
I know you want to
You need to,
You have no one else
Feel my skin,
Steal my heart,
I dare you
Ha, I know you can't
It's too late now
You've missed your chance
You still walked through me,
When i was real,
Remember?
You tuned me out,
When you could still
Hear me
You didn't see me,
Even when I was right there,
Next to you
You stole my heart
Once upon a time,
But forgot to give it back
Too bad you never realized you had it
Might've done something with it,
Well, now i took it back myself
And you used me,
One too many times,
So you can't anymore
Because,
Guess what,
You've lost me
You cant see me
you can't hear me
you can't feel me
I'm dead to you,
And if you don't mind,
I'd like to keep it that way
I mean, there's only
A limited amount of times you can screw me over,
Before i start to dig your grave, right?
Copyright ©
drtylilsecret
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2006-02-24 23:54:56]
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Re: Too Late
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by eggflipper on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 12:01:57 AM AEST
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| A fitting way to write for the message to get across. |
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Re: Too Late
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 12:39:50 AM AEST
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Another good one. I like how you recall things like being used, walked through, tuned out throughout the poem. Its a sign of great poetry.
~April |
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Re: Too Late
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by Mangs on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 02:50:26 AM AEST
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Awesome.....simple..but awesome...its beauty lies in its simplicity
Umang. |
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Re: Too Late
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 03:48:53 AM AEST
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I think I kind of know what you mean. Sometimes people you care about just aren't paying attention. Sometimes they are though - I guess it just depends.
Blessings, J.
"Cellophane. I should be cellophane."
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Re: Too Late
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 11:05:11 AM AEST
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this is truly awesome. whoever this is written about...i have no sympathy for them, it seems as though they put you through a lot of pain. i love it...i love how you both are kinda of telling them how you feel, and your expressing all of your feelings. anyway, i love it
- Beth -
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Re: Too Late
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 08:09:00 PM AEST
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Very seriously written. You wrote it in a most pleasing way. Honest, up front..
Curtsy.. thank you for not allowing yourself to be used, walked over.. and not letting your power be taken away any longer..
Hugs, raquelLeah |
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Re: Too Late
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by Maciej on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 08:43:31 PM AEST
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we all feel ignored from time to time hearts lay broken over time we have to rise and realize that we have a voice that needs to be heard. such is thepliht of teenage america. i liked the theme of your peace kepp writting
~Maciej
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Re: Too Late
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by potpiegrrl on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 04:09:33 PM AEST
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wow. this made me cry...too close to home.
potpie |
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Re: Too Late
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by Broken-Suicide on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 12:40:06 AM AEST
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| I love it! |
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Re: Too Late
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by Recyclebin on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 04:40:54 PM AEST
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Another great poem.
Never stop writing, u have talent that many long for.
Laterz
~Jay~ |
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Re: Too Late
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by spencer on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 07:00:43 AM AEST
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| simply fantastic |
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Re: Too Late
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by spencer on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 07:01:29 AM AEST
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| simply fantastic |
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Re: Too Late
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by AdamChantell on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 10:04:16 PM AEST
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very painful poem but a great poem at the same time. i hope your not feeling used anymore. keep your spirits up and smile k?
-Chris
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Re: Too Late
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 01:33:03 AM AEST
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I can relate on a multi-personal level-
playing the roll at both ends
good work-
B
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