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[aid] => mick
[title] => pEr4eCtIoN
[time] => 2006-02-23 22:25:10
[hometext] => my own poem and yet it makes me speechless.. kinda weird lol. tell me what yall think plz :)
[bodytext] => Achieving Perfection My Ultimate Sin Fighting a Fight I Cannot Win So Many Imperfections So Many Hidden Scars Chasing Dreams Are Like Trying To Touch Stars So Many Layers Within This Complicated Creature Surgery To Give You A Perfect Figure Caricature Of Perfection Wearing A Mask Of Deception Rid Me Of This Curse I Don’t Know Anything Worse Anything Worse Than Dreaming of The Unreachable Its Like Trying To Gain The Unattainable Humanity’s Worse Flaw Is Fed Into The Minds Of The Nation As Perfection And We Are All In Over Our Heads Trying To Achieve What Isn’t There It’s Just Not Fair Hypocrite Religions Hypocrite Traditions Passing Down This Plague This Plague Of Perfection What Is The World Coming To? A Girl Pukes Her Guts Out 24/7 Just To Get Some Guy’s Attention Anorexic Models Flaunting The Look Of A Flat Stomach Portraying What Is Defined In The Nation’s Dictionary As Perfection We Are Sinking Down Into A Vast Whirlpool Of Confusion Who Are These People Who Implant The Visions Of Perfection Into The Minds Of The Human Race Who Are They? Who Are They To Say What Is Right And What Is Wrong? Who Are They Anyway? I See These Kids Trying To Fit Into The Latest Trends Trying To Display The Explanation Of Emo, Goth, Punk, And Prep Being Forced To Be Labeled As These And Others Just Because Someone Says That They Aren’t “Cool” Because They Are Different Imperfections? Perfections? Who Are These People Who Implant The Visions Of Perfection Into The Minds Of The Human Race Who Are They? Who Are They To Say What Is Right And What Is Wrong? Who Are They Anyway? And Most Important Of All What Is Perfection Anyway? How Can A Dictionary Hold A Definition When Everyone Seems To Form Their Own Opinion That Ends In Self Mutilation To Obtain “PERFECTION” All These Dreams Of Hollywood Druggies Forcing Us To Conform To The Unwritten Law Of The Land: Anyone Who Doesn’t Fit Into This Flawless Mold Is To Be Cast Aside As Just A Piece Of Trash Nothing About The Soul Matters Anymore It Is All About Achieving Perfection Our Ultimate Sin Fighting a Fight We Cannot Win ~Kortnie~ [comments] => 4 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 21 [informant] => justme03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 34 [ratings] => 13 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
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