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Array ( [sid] => 115285 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => whats happening [time] => 2006-02-23 18:18:56 [hometext] => to a friend that i deeply cherish. just trying to get his attention [bodytext] => You know of my secret
and have yet to make a move,
so now I am coming to you
ready to tell you all.

you disappeared for a while
working so hard,
no i need to find a way to get your attention.
with no idea how...

i can offer you sex,
but thats just not enough
i can offer you love
but thats just too much

so i offer you friendship
and i eagerly await your reply.
so tell me one thing
will you ever be my guy??? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 33 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

whats happening

Contributed by brokenwings on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 06:18:56 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

You know of my secret
and have yet to make a move,
so now I am coming to you
ready to tell you all.

you disappeared for a while
working so hard,
no i need to find a way to get your attention.
with no idea how...

i can offer you sex,
but thats just not enough
i can offer you love
but thats just too much

so i offer you friendship
and i eagerly await your reply.
so tell me one thing
will you ever be my guy???

Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2006-02-23 18:18:56]
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Re: whats happening (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 07:46:51 PM AEST
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~*Brokenwings*~
I hope u get the attention of ur cherished friend. If this doesn't get their attention then I don't know what will. I wish u all the best of luck. May things work out the way u want them too.
*warm hugs*
~sue~

Re: whats happening (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 11:24:03 PM AEST
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I don't know what this poem has more of, honesty or innocence but i do know one thing
u tell like it is straight from the heart. in a word, Beautiful. Keep the faith, love is saturated with iornies.

Ben

Re: whats happening (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 07:00:02 PM AEST
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I have to smile at you, dear writer. Such an outpour of honesty here. Friendship is the best way to begin, of course.. than it can evolve into deeper love. Send him a card .. or better than that... buy a nice card that contains no words inside, and then.. write him a nice poem... this one is delicate enough.. yes, be honest and upfront with him, tell him you care and would love to have a nice longlasting relationship with him. You are correct, no sex ... that might be a nice way to join, but then, if you offer too much of yourself.. all at once.. then you may go to fast in the relationship and there is a chance it won't last long. Those who have patience and can wait.. have very beautiful relationships ... longlasting.. take care.. hugs.. raquelLeah

Re: whats happening (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 10:47:53 PM AEST
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Oh, thats so sweet! And I can relate so much!
Nice write!
-Drapes

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