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Array ( [sid] => 115283 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Secret [time] => 2006-02-23 16:46:54 [hometext] => This poem is about how my heart has healed it's scars from being broken. Please comment. Much appreciated, Kuno [bodytext] => I told him my secret,
But he told me no.
And now I regret,
My one action so.

I feel very empty,
Like a glass half gone.
But isn't it nifty?
I've done something wrong.

I needed to tell,
To get it out of me.
The answer was as clear as a bell,
But now I finally see.

I'm not doing too good,
And I finally realize,
That he'd rather go chop wood,
Than look once in my eyes.

Is it going to be finished?
Is this when it all ends?
My defences are diminished,
When I look at him!

Does he know how much I love him?
Does he know how much I care?
If I drowned would he swim (to me)?
Would my life be fair?

I can't understand?
What's wrong with me?
Did I start to reprimand?
Is it something he sees?

I drove him away,
But I didn't mean to.
And now he'll never hear me say:
I love you.


That is the longest poem I have ever written! Hope you liked it ^.^ [comments] => 4 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 33 [informant] => Kunoichi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
My Secret

Contributed by Kunoichi on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 04:46:54 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



I told him my secret,
But he told me no.
And now I regret,
My one action so.

I feel very empty,
Like a glass half gone.
But isn't it nifty?
I've done something wrong.

I needed to tell,
To get it out of me.
The answer was as clear as a bell,
But now I finally see.

I'm not doing too good,
And I finally realize,
That he'd rather go chop wood,
Than look once in my eyes.

Is it going to be finished?
Is this when it all ends?
My defences are diminished,
When I look at him!

Does he know how much I love him?
Does he know how much I care?
If I drowned would he swim (to me)?
Would my life be fair?

I can't understand?
What's wrong with me?
Did I start to reprimand?
Is it something he sees?

I drove him away,
But I didn't mean to.
And now he'll never hear me say:
I love you.


That is the longest poem I have ever written! Hope you liked it ^.^




Copyright © Kunoichi ... [ 2006-02-23 16:46:54]
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Re: My Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by Gigi_15 on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 05:43:14 PM AEST
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im sorry:(:(.. great poem !! the best poems comes from when we;'re sad:):)
-Gigi


Re: My Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 06:20:52 PM AEST
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good write.. liked it alot...
tasha


Re: My Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by sassydovebird on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 07:15:24 PM AEST
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i think this poem is very good...Sounds like he isnt ready for a commitment...Good write...sassy


Re: My Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 03:45:46 PM AEST
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I really liked this!
I can sorta relate...But I don't need to tell 'him' to know he feels this way...
Good luck to you.
-Drapes




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