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Array ( [sid] => 115271 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Neola [time] => 2006-02-23 14:07:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Run through the fields.
Feel the warm light on your face.
Swim through the rivers.
Feel the cool liquid on your face.
How does it feel?
To be able to.
Breath.
To see.
Do you think it’s a beautiful thing?
Many different answers.
For many different people.
How does that make you feel?
Don’t waste time with these questions.
Keep running.
Keep swimming.
Keep living.
For life is a beautiful thing.
Many see this.
Many do not.
Of course! This is just another question.
Of who you are.
Where you are.
Take a look around.
See life.
Don’t shut it out.
Welcome it.
For you live but once.
And once is not a long time.
For me.
I believe life is beautiful.
For me.
I live life.
I welcome it.
But the choice as always.
Is in your hands.
No one else’s.
So what will it be?

2~22~06
R0b
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Neola

Contributed by R0b on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 02:07:41 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Run through the fields.
Feel the warm light on your face.
Swim through the rivers.
Feel the cool liquid on your face.
How does it feel?
To be able to.
Breath.
To see.
Do you think it’s a beautiful thing?
Many different answers.
For many different people.
How does that make you feel?
Don’t waste time with these questions.
Keep running.
Keep swimming.
Keep living.
For life is a beautiful thing.
Many see this.
Many do not.
Of course! This is just another question.
Of who you are.
Where you are.
Take a look around.
See life.
Don’t shut it out.
Welcome it.
For you live but once.
And once is not a long time.
For me.
I believe life is beautiful.
For me.
I live life.
I welcome it.
But the choice as always.
Is in your hands.
No one else’s.
So what will it be?

2~22~06
R0b




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Re: Neola (User Rating: 1 )
by lovebug on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 02:20:23 PM AEST
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NICE POEM KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.


Re: Neola (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 05:27:55 PM AEST
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Good work. I enjoy life-affirming pieces like this, and they're not written often enough, to my mind. Keep it up.

Your line breaks are chosen well, but there's some over-punctuation. Not every line needs a period.

Andrew


Re: Neola (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 12:08:13 PM AEST
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Don't listen to him.. that is your choice to put periods at the end of every line.. Just like i choose not to put any on my poems.. I like this poem. I am happy that you believe life is beautiful and that you want to live life but for me and my opinions about myself well lets just not go there.. I have been through alot of sh*t and i just am gald that i have you in my life and i thank you for being there for me..

love you
christina




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