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[aid] => mick
[title] => MY POEM SIN.
[time] => 2006-02-23 13:45:10
[hometext] => just another one of my poems .... feel free to comment.:)0-0
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MY POEM SIN.
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butterflygirl40
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Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 01:45:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Re: MY POEM SIN.
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by amaya_h_k on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 01:54:45 PM AEST
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| I love this poem. It's exactly what I have been telling all my friends about sex and children. |
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Re: MY POEM SIN.
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by R0b on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 02:12:03 PM AEST
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| That pretty much says it all. |
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Re: MY POEM SIN.
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by lovebug on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 02:14:38 PM AEST
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| I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM TOO BUT I AM SORRY TO SAY THIS IS JUST A REMAKE OF THE ORIGINAL VERSION. I READ THIS POEM IN GRAMMAR SCHOOL BUT IT WAS THE DIRTY VERSION. |
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Re: MY POEM SIN.
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by ButchHoward on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 02:44:38 PM AEST
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I like didactic poems. This one teaches one of the most important lessons of all. But that won't be a problem for my daughter. I will be right there on all her dates until she is at least 25! Yikes!
Butch |
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Re: MY POEM SIN.
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by eggflipper on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 04:09:35 PM AEST
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| That's one way to put it. |
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Re: MY POEM SIN.
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 01:06:57 AM AEST
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| I'm with Lovebug...I am pretty sure I've seen or heard this a long time ago. Are you sure this is an original poem? This is nothing like your writes. Just an observation. Peace, Laura |
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Re: MY POEM SIN.
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 08:12:02 AM AEST
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| hmmmm wise words |
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Re: MY POEM SIN.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 04:42:31 PM AEST
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| Oh, oh, someone is not watching out for the little kiddies.. and people thought it was so cute to see two little babies kissing and fondling each other, even took a pic of it.. shame on them. We all must also realize, it is not just the little boys we need to watch out for, better watch out for those little girls too.. raise up children decently, don't let them run off and be on their own, without adult supervision, even if you want them out of your hair so you can do what ever it is you do.. Oh yes, I was accused of leaving my job several times to check to see if my kids were in school.. really went to after school sports.. watched them all the way walking to the store.. down the culdesac.. and more.. they tell me thank you to these days.. and so do their wives.. if those older. Get married or not.. have a child, you still have to at one time or another, work forward in your life.. do those things you were supposed to do before the family comes along.. the thirteen year old girl.. with child.. parents raise it up after its birth.. the 17 yr old girl, grandparents raise it up so she can get a job and go to college.. the older woman who wants a child but no father.. just the seed.. these things are chosen priorities.. won't get into the deeper sin how the seed is spread.... but you get my jist.. somehow, I pray for all those unwanted children, that the good Lord will see them through... thank you for this poem... a great message in it.. perhaps parents will read it.. to see why you must watch over your children.. and teachers and everyone who is in charge of these children.. raquelLeah |
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