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Array ( [sid] => 115262 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => waiting seems to call [time] => 2006-02-23 12:28:34 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A thought, upon a wrenching act
That then not seeming so ill
But now is facing my mirror
I feel the wrath of act
To a man I wished to find
A man that forgotten has shown
And hurt what I had wanted so long
For a moment of past bliss
Everything in one can’t be?
Nothing in another but what eye can see!
A man full of life and love
Compared to that of none
But pulling force of him to heart
Is long last and fruitless in gather
Strange package with all I wished
I sense a prayer was answered
But to this comes a challenge, mark
To see what would lie in nothings future
A forced life of fulfilled dreams and wishes
Or a blissful act of emptiness.
Waiting seems to call.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 66 [informant] => boobiepeach [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

waiting seems to call

Contributed by boobiepeach on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 12:28:34 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

A thought, upon a wrenching act
That then not seeming so ill
But now is facing my mirror
I feel the wrath of act
To a man I wished to find
A man that forgotten has shown
And hurt what I had wanted so long
For a moment of past bliss
Everything in one can’t be?
Nothing in another but what eye can see!
A man full of life and love
Compared to that of none
But pulling force of him to heart
Is long last and fruitless in gather
Strange package with all I wished
I sense a prayer was answered
But to this comes a challenge, mark
To see what would lie in nothings future
A forced life of fulfilled dreams and wishes
Or a blissful act of emptiness.
Waiting seems to call.

Copyright Â© boobiepeach ... [ 2006-02-23 12:28:34]
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Re: waiting seems to call (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 03:52:08 PM AEST
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Dear Peach,
I lived a life of FORCED dreams and I know how miserable a person can be with such a mate.! Better "Stear Clear" dear Peach....put your waiting to call away from your reach!
Beautifully created, and easily understood especially for those that we have been there, and done that!
Warm love
consue

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