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I see no light upon my path
I...feel so heartless
I proceed to spark upon my wrath
This anger...such a bitter madness
A pain that one would never wish upon another
These tears...they wither with sadness
Like rain that so cleverly smuthers
I...used to have this light
A light that would shine like gold
No one could shun this light with night
Because with it...I stood bold
But now...this light has been shadowed
For I ...see it not
There is no soul that glows
For it is something that I ...have suddenly forgot
Vanquished...you may say
Taken away by something I yet to see
Feeling such anguish..day by day
Praying to be ok...but knowing that I will never be

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Living in Darkness

Contributed by poetic_influence on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 11:41:26 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I...am in eternal darkness
I see no light upon my path
I...feel so heartless
I proceed to spark upon my wrath
This anger...such a bitter madness
A pain that one would never wish upon another
These tears...they wither with sadness
Like rain that so cleverly smuthers
I...used to have this light
A light that would shine like gold
No one could shun this light with night
Because with it...I stood bold
But now...this light has been shadowed
For I ...see it not
There is no soul that glows
For it is something that I ...have suddenly forgot
Vanquished...you may say
Taken away by something I yet to see
Feeling such anguish..day by day
Praying to be ok...but knowing that I will never be

Copyright © poetic_influence ... [ 2006-02-23 11:41:26]
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Re: Living in Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by boobiepeach on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 12:34:07 PM AEST
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dark write
but you dont have to give up
clouds will clear no matter how dark
time sucks sole from life but it also heals

peach

Re: Living in Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 12:43:23 PM AEST
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I dont have much advice accept to keep your faith alive or at least try.
This is a very good write.

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