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Array ( [sid] => 115253 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Off love.. [time] => 2006-02-23 07:22:12 [hometext] => PrEc!OuS_ExC!TeR.. [bodytext] => OFF LOVE...

You are sad, you feel bad, you are looking for relief
There's a blade close at hand and you're losing your belief
And your self, make a call, there's a fog over all
In your life...

You were mine, I am fine, there's no symptom of decline
I don't seem to be hurt, I've been livin' off a lie
In a sense I betrayed my own heart and my mind
It's my life...

It's just the same old song
Recalling how things went wrong
We're fallin' like two lost souls
Off love...

You believe love is gone, there is nothing to be done
Off a cliff throw the gun, there is nothing to be won
Time will kill, you will see, there's a boat on the sea
Of your life...

What I know is you lose, if you fail you'll be doomed
Can't you see you're confused, obsessed and abussed
Stay awake, make a call, just do nothing at all
To your life...


It's just the same old song
Recalling how things went wrong
We're fallin' like two lost souls
Off love...
And it's just the same old song
Addiction is grown so strong
A lifetime apart just to long
Off love...
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Off love..

Contributed by deathbringer on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 07:22:12 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



OFF LOVE...

You are sad, you feel bad, you are looking for relief
There's a blade close at hand and you're losing your belief
And your self, make a call, there's a fog over all
In your life...

You were mine, I am fine, there's no symptom of decline
I don't seem to be hurt, I've been livin' off a lie
In a sense I betrayed my own heart and my mind
It's my life...

It's just the same old song
Recalling how things went wrong
We're fallin' like two lost souls
Off love...

You believe love is gone, there is nothing to be done
Off a cliff throw the gun, there is nothing to be won
Time will kill, you will see, there's a boat on the sea
Of your life...

What I know is you lose, if you fail you'll be doomed
Can't you see you're confused, obsessed and abussed
Stay awake, make a call, just do nothing at all
To your life...


It's just the same old song
Recalling how things went wrong
We're fallin' like two lost souls
Off love...
And it's just the same old song
Addiction is grown so strong
A lifetime apart just to long
Off love...




Copyright © deathbringer ... [ 2006-02-23 07:22:12]
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Re: Off love.. (User Rating: 1 )
by deathbringer on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 04:34:06 AM AEST
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this is a poem of one of my frinds.This is NOT my poem.


Re: Off love.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 05:36:46 PM AEST
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tell your friend wonderful poem.. that there is a prayer that is the answer.. humans are good at convincing themselves there is no way out.. the way in is God.. lovely poem.. raquel Leah .. hugs..




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