Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 19:36:31 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 115197 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Nightmares [time] => 2006-02-22 08:28:47 [hometext] => I Am The Architect Of My Own Destruction, The Maker Of My Unmaking... Another By: Tony Shaneyfelt [bodytext] => When you lose your breath in the deepest sleep, the door to you mind opens a door of broken dreams, everything that could have gone wrong in your life will not be forgotten, but remembered by everyone who wasn't there. Broken dreams are fearsome though they show not there faces. but only the things you fear most! If you lose your breath you will have done the will of the other who thought he could. The one who lifted his crippled hand and so the nightmare began... when the trees started dying, the sun started setting, bringing no moon light, but a blood red blanket of clouds surrounding me, I had forgotten who I was supposed to be. I am speaking of the time I went to the house of the friend I never had and layed down to sleep, and slowly died.

I never woke up from that nightmare....
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 13 [informant] => lifeslittleangel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Nightmares

Contributed by lifeslittleangel on Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 08:28:47 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

When you lose your breath in the deepest sleep, the door to you mind opens a door of broken dreams, everything that could have gone wrong in your life will not be forgotten, but remembered by everyone who wasn't there. Broken dreams are fearsome though they show not there faces. but only the things you fear most! If you lose your breath you will have done the will of the other who thought he could. The one who lifted his crippled hand and so the nightmare began... when the trees started dying, the sun started setting, bringing no moon light, but a blood red blanket of clouds surrounding me, I had forgotten who I was supposed to be. I am speaking of the time I went to the house of the friend I never had and layed down to sleep, and slowly died.

I never woke up from that nightmare....

Copyright © lifeslittleangel ... [ 2006-02-22 08:28:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Nightmares (User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 10:37:02 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

hm well nice...//....but unusual format more like verse...anyway feel the same thoughts with my poem Ghost of my Desire

Re: Nightmares (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 01:43:31 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

amazingly written

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com