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Array ( [sid] => 115186 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MY FINAL DAYS [time] => 2006-02-21 23:06:41 [hometext] => I WROTE THIS THE DAY I THOUGHT I WAS GONNA LOSE SOMEONE VERY IMPORTANT TO ME [bodytext] => AS I TAKE THE RAZOR BLADE OUT OF MY POCKET
HOPING TO BLEED TO DEATH

THE VOICES IN MY HEAD SAY DO IT QUICK
SO I TAKE A DEEP BREATH

AS I SLOWLY CUT MY WRIST
AND BLOOD STARTS TO MAKE A SLOW STREAM

MY MOUTH OPENS WIDE
AND MY VOICE STARTS TO SCREAM

I'VE DONE IT I START TO YELL
BUT I'M CATHOLIC SUICIDE MEANS A ONE WAY
TICKET TO HELL

I REMEBER MY FAMILY AS I PASS OUT
AND HIT THE FLOOR

MY BODY LIES LIFELESS
AS SOMEONE OPENS THE DOOR

SOMEONE IS TRYING TO SAVE MY LIFE
IN MY MIND I'M YELLING PLEASE DON'T

THE BLOOD CAN BE TAKEN A AWAY
BUT THE PAIN I LIVE WITH IN MY LIFE WON'T

AS I TAKE MY FINAL BREATH, AND DREFT TO MY DEATH
MY FRIENDS AND FAMILY GO TO THEIR KNEES AND PRAY
TO HAVE ME BACK BECAUSE THEY SAY I WAS THE BEST [comments] => 4 [counter] => 274 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Tiffyo4 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 26 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

MY FINAL DAYS

Contributed by Tiffyo4 on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 11:06:41 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

AS I TAKE THE RAZOR BLADE OUT OF MY POCKET
HOPING TO BLEED TO DEATH

THE VOICES IN MY HEAD SAY DO IT QUICK
SO I TAKE A DEEP BREATH

AS I SLOWLY CUT MY WRIST
AND BLOOD STARTS TO MAKE A SLOW STREAM

MY MOUTH OPENS WIDE
AND MY VOICE STARTS TO SCREAM

I'VE DONE IT I START TO YELL
BUT I'M CATHOLIC SUICIDE MEANS A ONE WAY
TICKET TO HELL

I REMEBER MY FAMILY AS I PASS OUT
AND HIT THE FLOOR

MY BODY LIES LIFELESS
AS SOMEONE OPENS THE DOOR

SOMEONE IS TRYING TO SAVE MY LIFE
IN MY MIND I'M YELLING PLEASE DON'T

THE BLOOD CAN BE TAKEN A AWAY
BUT THE PAIN I LIVE WITH IN MY LIFE WON'T

AS I TAKE MY FINAL BREATH, AND DREFT TO MY DEATH
MY FRIENDS AND FAMILY GO TO THEIR KNEES AND PRAY
TO HAVE ME BACK BECAUSE THEY SAY I WAS THE BEST

Copyright © Tiffyo4 ... [ 2006-02-21 23:06:41]
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Re: MY FINAL DAYS (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowFox on Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 12:40:48 AM AEST
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This is a very strong written poem. I know the feeling of being close to someone that you almost lost.

Re: MY FINAL DAYS (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 01:31:38 AM AEST
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very sad poem and it was so good.

Re: MY FINAL DAYS (User Rating: 1 )
by lilblkcat on Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 01:43:23 PM AEST
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wow.. that poem really touches the heart. thank you so much for posting it.

Re: MY FINAL DAYS (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 07:34:34 PM AEST
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deep words you write i cant believe that someone ha sthe same feelings as i once did is kool yet bad.im glad youcould write out these thoughts. nice job

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