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Array ( [sid] => 115168 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => into the delicate END. [time] => 2006-02-21 18:58:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The cold shocks my body,
Into a warm sunmission.
The movement of these chills,
Causes sweet shivers to rise within me.
Oh the sunken soul is sinking!
I wish for a memory like that...
That vision of transparency,
Tinted blue, and silver.
The far cries of triumph and terror,
Ringing and sounding - but dull and indistinct!
My care, seeping into open flowing floods of calm -
They can't hurt me anymore.
Oh how the sunken soul is sinking!
A thud, vibrations and jags,
This colossus of a shock-absorber
Lining my life now, a comfort of fate.
Fully submerged in passionate death,
Shaking softly with the murmurs of the deep.
No fear!
No anguish awaits me here!
Alone and empty, but graceful,
Unaware of anyhting but silence and haze.
And all the blue and silver speckles,
Made of a peaceful euphoria.
Tensions divide, subside,
For no had can reach me, touch me or infect me anymore.
Nothing can rape what's inside of me here.
I'm alone and elated,
Dead and empty, but PURE.
Oh my sweet beloved!
Won't you join me in this perfect realm -
Of slow, decadant decay evermore?
Oh how my sunken soul has sank!
Oh the joy, of drowning.
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into the delicate END.

Contributed by niere on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 06:58:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The cold shocks my body,
Into a warm sunmission.
The movement of these chills,
Causes sweet shivers to rise within me.
Oh the sunken soul is sinking!
I wish for a memory like that...
That vision of transparency,
Tinted blue, and silver.
The far cries of triumph and terror,
Ringing and sounding - but dull and indistinct!
My care, seeping into open flowing floods of calm -
They can't hurt me anymore.
Oh how the sunken soul is sinking!
A thud, vibrations and jags,
This colossus of a shock-absorber
Lining my life now, a comfort of fate.
Fully submerged in passionate death,
Shaking softly with the murmurs of the deep.
No fear!
No anguish awaits me here!
Alone and empty, but graceful,
Unaware of anyhting but silence and haze.
And all the blue and silver speckles,
Made of a peaceful euphoria.
Tensions divide, subside,
For no had can reach me, touch me or infect me anymore.
Nothing can rape what's inside of me here.
I'm alone and elated,
Dead and empty, but PURE.
Oh my sweet beloved!
Won't you join me in this perfect realm -
Of slow, decadant decay evermore?
Oh how my sunken soul has sank!
Oh the joy, of drowning.

Copyright © niere ... [ 2006-02-21 18:58:56]
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Re: into the delicate END. (User Rating: 1 )
by moon-woman on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 12:33:58 PM AEST
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awh that was really good. nice one ;) xx

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