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A shattered dream so cold to embrace,
A memory so clear I remember her face,
A tear so sad it creates a river of pain,
A moment I cry as the sky darkens and starts to rain.

Tears so many on the ground it’s hard to see,
The part of you still deep down inside me,
Each moment I am alone I can’t help wonder why,
Why each time I think of you, you always make me cry.

A love so strong I try to forget,
A time with you I will never regret,
A kiss I taste still to this day
A touch from you that words will never say.

But still I wonder, why did you have to go?
When I was screaming out loud I love you in ways you never know,
I guess I loved you but didn’t know who you were,
When I think of you now my emotions are a blur.

Come back I know I was wrong, I promise to be true,
Come back, come back let me love you…..
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Let Me Love You

Contributed by RaZiel on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 02:37:57 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Let me love you…

A shattered dream so cold to embrace,
A memory so clear I remember her face,
A tear so sad it creates a river of pain,
A moment I cry as the sky darkens and starts to rain.

Tears so many on the ground it’s hard to see,
The part of you still deep down inside me,
Each moment I am alone I can’t help wonder why,
Why each time I think of you, you always make me cry.

A love so strong I try to forget,
A time with you I will never regret,
A kiss I taste still to this day
A touch from you that words will never say.

But still I wonder, why did you have to go?
When I was screaming out loud I love you in ways you never know,
I guess I loved you but didn’t know who you were,
When I think of you now my emotions are a blur.

Come back I know I was wrong, I promise to be true,
Come back, come back let me love you…..

Copyright Â© RaZiel ... [ 2006-02-21 14:37:57]
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Re: Let Me Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 02:47:30 PM AEST
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Very good write :) Welcome to YPCD :)

Re: Let Me Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by eggflipper on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 04:15:27 PM AEST
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nicely done
raw emotions come through

Re: Let Me Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by Gigi_15 on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 05:40:34 PM AEST
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awwww...wow..thats veryyy romantic,..I hope she comes back...becuz u seem to be worth it and have strong feelings...awesome poem..it really touched me:)..she's lucky to be able to have a guy like you..i don;'t know you but..by the way you expressed ur feelings..well that said enough..

-Gigi

Re: Let Me Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by kiza on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 05:45:33 PM AEST
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thats a realy good poem,kinda sad,but still amazin

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