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Array ( [sid] => 115127 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MY POEM FEET!!! [time] => 2006-02-20 23:08:24 [hometext] => JUST ANOTHER ONE OF MY POEMS FEEL FREE TO COMMENT!! THIS IS SHORT. [bodytext] => My feet dont look like no athlete feet and they sure do take the beat of looking like blackfeet.
I went to go check the mail and met someone called buckwheat and it seem complete till I hit the concrete.
I wanted to defeat and delete and eat but not no feet and I sure dont have no flatfeet.
I was running down the street and you could hear my heartbeat and the heat.
I went to buy me some meat and meet me someone named mesquite and he was suppossed to be neat.
Then I took a seat and changed the sheets because it begin to sleet down the street and it look so sweet.
The sleet might look sweet but I dont like sweetmeat .
I went to the store to buy me a treat and some wheat cereal.
Then I went back home and watched the sleet and ate my wheat cereal...(Yummy it was.) [comments] => 4 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 43 [informant] => butterflygirl40 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 26 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

MY POEM FEET!!!

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:08:24 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

My feet dont look like no athlete feet and they sure do take the beat of looking like blackfeet.
I went to go check the mail and met someone called buckwheat and it seem complete till I hit the concrete.
I wanted to defeat and delete and eat but not no feet and I sure dont have no flatfeet.
I was running down the street and you could hear my heartbeat and the heat.
I went to buy me some meat and meet me someone named mesquite and he was suppossed to be neat.
Then I took a seat and changed the sheets because it begin to sleet down the street and it look so sweet.
The sleet might look sweet but I dont like sweetmeat .
I went to the store to buy me a treat and some wheat cereal.
Then I went back home and watched the sleet and ate my wheat cereal...(Yummy it was.)

Copyright © butterflygirl40 ... [ 2006-02-20 23:08:24]
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Re: MY POEM FEET!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:23:39 PM AEST
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that was.......random, lol, dont see a lot of that here.

but fun to read =D

~natalya

Re: MY POEM FEET!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by eggflipper on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:30:11 PM AEST
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sometimes it is fun to see where words will lead you.

Re: MY POEM FEET!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:44:54 PM AEST
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I just love your poem Butterflygirl!!!! This is great, and very unique, was it frosted mini wheats ?

LG

Re: MY POEM FEET!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 01:32:17 AM AEST
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U r very, very, very creative with the words!
I luv your unique artistic style.
huggs, smiles,
emy

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