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Array ( [sid] => 115119 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hope [time] => 2006-02-20 21:57:32 [hometext] => it is in the morning we awake anew, and continue to build from the previous days [bodytext] => And the light that has fallen
upon his eyes,

beckons him,

to witness
the birth of a cloud.
(Wondering if night will be seen again)

And if it be this morning
is all that is left,

this birth
is witnessed in silence.

But if it be
that morning is the representative of hope,

he wishes not to be awake in the afternoon
for his heart has lost love before. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 284 [topic] => 22 [informant] => eggflipper [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Hope

Contributed by eggflipper on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 09:57:32 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

And the light that has fallen
upon his eyes,

beckons him,

to witness
the birth of a cloud.
(Wondering if night will be seen again)

And if it be this morning
is all that is left,

this birth
is witnessed in silence.

But if it be
that morning is the representative of hope,

he wishes not to be awake in the afternoon
for his heart has lost love before.

Copyright © eggflipper ... [ 2006-02-20 21:57:32]
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Re: Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by poisonpen00ad on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 10:05:09 PM AEST
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This is just beautiful. Great work.

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Re: Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 10:24:54 PM AEST
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Interesting style... Well done!
Jenni

Re: Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:34:57 PM AEST
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this is different but i like the flow good job..

JENNI

Re: Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by travisk on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 04:01:45 AM AEST
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In all honesty, I can actually relate. In fact, its a bit creepy how close it comes to an actual situation--if I interpreted the subtlety correctly.

well done.

Re: Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 05:03:13 PM AEST
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very moving. I feel you here.Beautiful

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