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Array ( [sid] => 115109 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Trade for Plastic [time] => 2006-02-20 20:00:10 [hometext] => a girl is left by a boy, who left her for a beautiful, but fake girl.. inspired by experience. [bodytext] => I cant help the jealousy
I thought it was just you and me
But shes what really matters I see,
This isnt how its meant to be.
At first everything was just fine
Because back then you were only mine
But now it seems I have to share
I really wish I didnt care

Im left here, completely stranded
Youve traded me in for a girl thats branded
Pretty, wonderful, perfect smile;
Beautiful, lovely, gorgeous hair
I hadnt caught on for quite awhile
But now its obvious I dont compare

So now, im simply all alone
Crying silently on the phone
As I leave you with the dial tone
Now youre nothing but a part of my past
When I thought that we would truly last [comments] => 2 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 22 [informant] => DieRomantic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Trade for Plastic

Contributed by DieRomantic on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 08:00:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I cant help the jealousy
I thought it was just you and me
But shes what really matters I see,
This isnt how its meant to be.
At first everything was just fine
Because back then you were only mine
But now it seems I have to share
I really wish I didnt care

Im left here, completely stranded
Youve traded me in for a girl thats branded
Pretty, wonderful, perfect smile;
Beautiful, lovely, gorgeous hair
I hadnt caught on for quite awhile
But now its obvious I dont compare

So now, im simply all alone
Crying silently on the phone
As I leave you with the dial tone
Now youre nothing but a part of my past
When I thought that we would truly last

Copyright © DieRomantic ... [ 2006-02-20 20:00:10]
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Re: Trade for Plastic (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 10:36:03 PM AEST
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very real, good writing (and i don't mean to sound insensitive because obviously that poem came from the heart)

keep at it

~natalya

Re: Trade for Plastic (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 12:36:03 AM AEST
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this is very well expressed.. someone close to me can relate to this feeling also.. very good write

JENNI

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