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Array ( [sid] => 115084 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Prisca [time] => 2006-02-20 10:55:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Have you sailed beyond the rings?
Touched the red giants or white dwarfs.
Ever read the script.
We where all supposed to read it!
From day one.
A loophole…
No such thing?
Look for one.
For when the Day of Dissolution is upon us.
Where will you hide?
Will you hide?
Or will you get on and take a ride.
This is where the road forks.
You must make a decision.
To the right, to the left.
Or straight.
To the ancient writings.
Read these. To sanctify.
Let the words purify you.
For you are the infected.
Many contained.
You could call it a quarantine.
But this is already a quarantine, is it not?
See the stone peaks.
Touch the flame, is it hot?
You can’t tell can you?
Does it confuse you, or answer?
Does it make questions or delete them?
You also need to decide that.
This is a journey of self.
You look to your left, to your right.
Whose there?
You only see yourself, am I right?
When you see this are you surprised?
Youre not who you think you are, are you?
…No…interesting.
Do you want to know why?
Remember.
For every question there is not always an answer.
Some will submit, others will fight.
Who will you be?
Who will you be…

2/17/06
R0b [comments] => 3 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 21 [informant] => R0b [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Prisca

Contributed by R0b on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 10:55:41 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Have you sailed beyond the rings?
Touched the red giants or white dwarfs.
Ever read the script.
We where all supposed to read it!
From day one.
A loophole…
No such thing?
Look for one.
For when the Day of Dissolution is upon us.
Where will you hide?
Will you hide?
Or will you get on and take a ride.
This is where the road forks.
You must make a decision.
To the right, to the left.
Or straight.
To the ancient writings.
Read these. To sanctify.
Let the words purify you.
For you are the infected.
Many contained.
You could call it a quarantine.
But this is already a quarantine, is it not?
See the stone peaks.
Touch the flame, is it hot?
You can’t tell can you?
Does it confuse you, or answer?
Does it make questions or delete them?
You also need to decide that.
This is a journey of self.
You look to your left, to your right.
Whose there?
You only see yourself, am I right?
When you see this are you surprised?
Youre not who you think you are, are you?
…No…interesting.
Do you want to know why?
Remember.
For every question there is not always an answer.
Some will submit, others will fight.
Who will you be?
Who will you be…

2/17/06
R0b

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Re: Prisca (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 12:51:34 AM AEST
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i have read both of your writes...both philosophical and thought provoking.
i enjoy your rhetorical questions...they add involvement and interest.
Some concepts raised here, felt as though they were suggesting thoughts of genesis.
Something which interests greatly.
Religion Vs. Science.
The first two lines utilise imagery very well, forming a picturesque view of space in my imagination.
An interesting journey.
Thanks for sharing.

Re: Prisca (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 06:51:41 PM AEST
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~*Rob*~,
Another thought provoking write by u. You take ur reader on an interesting adventure into outer space. Captivating and very well penned. You raise the questions of difference between religion and science. Awesome writing ~*Rob*~
*warm hugs*
~sue~

Re: Prisca (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 11:59:47 AM AEST
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Okay i don't want to sound like i am quoting from the other two comments on this poem but I am telling you that i am not..

I think that all your poems are philosopical and that they pose alot of great points and questions that make people really think. I love the way that you write your poems. I thought this one was written well..
I love you
christina

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