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Array ( [sid] => 115081 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Once we were there... [time] => 2006-02-20 10:12:12 [hometext] => well.. a surrender to turn of fate [bodytext] => Once we were there
blissful in love.
With grace and glad
in our hearts.

Once we had loved-
fine and fierce.
Our lips raw with kisses.
Our bodies burning with desires.

Once it happened,unaware.
You said you'd enough.
No fight,no hurt;
just plain drained of love,
and you left me
to die;night after night.

Its hard to bear,
but harder to hear
that,once we were there. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 297 [topic] => 22 [informant] => joydeep_nath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Once we were there...

Contributed by joydeep_nath on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 10:12:12 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Once we were there
blissful in love.
With grace and glad
in our hearts.

Once we had loved-
fine and fierce.
Our lips raw with kisses.
Our bodies burning with desires.

Once it happened,unaware.
You said you'd enough.
No fight,no hurt;
just plain drained of love,
and you left me
to die;night after night.

Its hard to bear,
but harder to hear
that,once we were there.

Copyright © joydeep_nath ... [ 2006-02-20 10:12:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Once we were there... (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 09:54:36 AM AEST
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These are apt words for lost love to each person the pain is deep and cutting. We are without words to describe such a betrayal. Our heart yearns and cries out and that is how it is. Great write.

Re: Once we were there... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th June 2015 @ 10:39:47 AM AEST
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"Our lips raw with kisses"
Write more like this and you'd be a pretty envied amongst your peers

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