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Array ( [sid] => 115026 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When all is quiet [time] => 2006-02-19 00:27:39 [hometext] => Not much of a poem really. Tell me what you think. [bodytext] => ~ ~ ~

As I sit here, I wonder,
Do you think of me?
As I do of you?

When it’s late and all is quiet?

Have you ever, I wonder,
Imagined a kiss?
Imagined a touch?

When you are alone and all is quiet?

Will we ever, I wonder,
Take a chance,
Break the rules,
Steal a moment together?

When all is quiet?

~ ~ ~
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When all is quiet

Contributed by OzChick on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 12:27:39 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

~ ~ ~

As I sit here, I wonder,
Do you think of me?
As I do of you?

When it’s late and all is quiet?

Have you ever, I wonder,
Imagined a kiss?
Imagined a touch?

When you are alone and all is quiet?

Will we ever, I wonder,
Take a chance,
Break the rules,
Steal a moment together?

When all is quiet?

~ ~ ~

Copyright Â© OzChick ... [ 2006-02-19 00:27:39]
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Re: When all is quiet (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 12:41:26 AM AEST
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good write. I know exactly how you feel. I hope the person also feels the same way good luck

Re: When all is quiet (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 12:45:41 AM AEST
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You caught a moment here, and quite nicely. I liked it. like hitting the pause button on your vcr and just watching and contemplating what's going on. Nice piece, even if it's "not much of a poem" in your words :P Thanks for sharing

Re: When all is quiet (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 04:33:23 AM AEST
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Jenny, Interesting write...curious though...fact or fiction going on here? Has a naughty cat and mouse feel to it. Good write. Peace, Laura

Re: When all is quiet (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 08:04:13 AM AEST
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well written and something I think a lot have thought throughout the ages

Shari

Re: When all is quiet (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 10:10:44 AM AEST
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Great write. Makes me think of the times I've sat and wondered these same thoughts...Mike

Re: When all is quiet (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 02:10:36 AM AEST
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wow i liked this piece jenny good write its different makes you think..

JENNI

Re: When all is quiet (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 04:48:38 AM AEST
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I like the reflectiveness to this piece.
Poetry that questions is a great thing in my eyes.
I really like this.
5 stars.

J

Re: When all is quiet (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 08:28:05 PM AEST
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What do I think? Well, you asked. ;-)

Short, simple and so sweet. Simply put, I think it's lovely.

And again....you have such a natural flow thing going on.

*kicks self for not reading your poems sooner*

Take care,

Tim
:-)

Re: When all is quiet (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th April 2010 @ 12:08:42 AM AEST
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And here I am again, reading it. Absolutely beautiful and am wondering why you would think that's it's not much of a poem.

This is what my dreams are made of.

Tim

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