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Help Me. Help me 'cause I'm lost. I don't know where you are. There is someone here with your face, but it's not you. I'm surrounded by strangers with loud voices, talking over my pleas. I don't think they see me. Their eyes are dark and hollow, seeing only what they want to see. I need to hide, far below their empty gaze, where they'll never find me.

Help Me. Help me 'cause I'm tired. I can't run anymore. Everything is so sharp here, like the finest blade of a sword. I'm scared to see what will come next. My tears make a river, following me as I run. I'm growing weaker and I don't know how much longer before the river swallows me. I need to pray, loud and clear into the night, where someone will hear me.

Help Me. Help me 'cause I'm dead. I can't see the light. There's nothing but silence anymore. You never saw me cry, but watched as my river of tears engulfed me, and swallowed me whole. Now my eyes are like yours, and we will see the same darkness. I need to escape, break this hard shell and emerge from the darkness, and you're coming with me. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Eternal_Darkness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
Help Me

Contributed by Eternal_Darkness on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



Help Me. Help me 'cause I'm trapped. I don't know where I am. It's so cold here, like the deepest part of winter. I need to be freed of my captors icy grasp and comeback into the sun where I can find warmth. I can hear voices, voices of my past, but no one's there. I need to fly, high above this place into the stars, where something is waiting.

Help Me. Help me 'cause I'm lost. I don't know where you are. There is someone here with your face, but it's not you. I'm surrounded by strangers with loud voices, talking over my pleas. I don't think they see me. Their eyes are dark and hollow, seeing only what they want to see. I need to hide, far below their empty gaze, where they'll never find me.

Help Me. Help me 'cause I'm tired. I can't run anymore. Everything is so sharp here, like the finest blade of a sword. I'm scared to see what will come next. My tears make a river, following me as I run. I'm growing weaker and I don't know how much longer before the river swallows me. I need to pray, loud and clear into the night, where someone will hear me.

Help Me. Help me 'cause I'm dead. I can't see the light. There's nothing but silence anymore. You never saw me cry, but watched as my river of tears engulfed me, and swallowed me whole. Now my eyes are like yours, and we will see the same darkness. I need to escape, break this hard shell and emerge from the darkness, and you're coming with me.




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Re: Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 10:59:14 PM AEST
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captivating.......


Re: Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 09:39:10 PM AEST
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Wow... this was freakin amazing totally powerful. I dont know what to say took my breath away.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 11:12:55 PM AEST
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you can see the hand of a cold soul behind these words... it seems that life hasn't dealt you any good cards... from the poems that i read of yours it seems that you feel very lonely and out of place... i pray that you find someone something to help you out... the poetry is so strong from what seems like a weakening soul
-Sid




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