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words always fail
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 07:50:04 PM in AEST
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a little confusion goes along way
trying to understand what happens day after day
look at us run like rodents hoping for a treat
gathered in groups stepping on others feet
we play cat and mouse with societys laws
understanding some but others with to many flaws
i try to set focus and speak out when i can
when the wreack a park or pollute some land
but i try as i might my words always fail
no one wants to hear a terriable tale
they are happy in there way they dont want to bother
who cares if others holler
why they have opera and doctor phil
they will never need a wake up pill
they do not need the cold slap of fate
they are happy to sit and gather and wait
but there time will come do not forget
we do what we do and live with regret
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Re: words always fail
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 10:24:51 PM AEST
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Good write man....good message. A few typos noted. The last line was the clencher for me....
But there time will come do not forget
we do what we do and live with regret
Peace, Laura |
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Re: words always fail
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by EverlastingDawn on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 07:03:11 AM AEST
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I really liked this poem. The emotions were so expressive and the message was beautiful. Good Write.
~Dawn |
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