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[sid] => 11484
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => HATE
[time] => 2003-01-28 12:00:00
[hometext] => Ode to my Dell/Microsoft computer
[bodytext] => Just disconnect me one more time
when I've not told you to
so I loose what I've been doing
d'you know what I will do
I'll go and get a hammer
The biggest you have seen
then come back to the study
and put it through your screen
[comments] => 25
[counter] => 408
[topic] => 6
[informant] => wrybod
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
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[pollID] => 0
[score] => 16
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => AngryPoetry
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HATE
Contributed by
wrybod
on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
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Just disconnect me one more time
when I've not told you to
so I loose what I've been doing
d'you know what I will do
I'll go and get a hammer
The biggest you have seen
then come back to the study
and put it through your screen
Copyright ©
wrybod
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2003-01-28 12:00:00]
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Re: HATE
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 12:11:36 PM AEST
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| oh, cyber-world, I know the feeling, but you gotta love it |
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Re: HATE
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 12:31:36 PM AEST
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| Tsk, tsk... you can't let the technology win. Hahaha, this one made me laugh. Good one. |
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Re: HATE
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 12:43:07 PM AEST
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| Sulk sulk sulk not speaking to nobody nohow |
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Re: HATE
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 12:46:07 PM AEST
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sulk sulk (glad you liked it) sulk sulk............
back tomorrow........I have a cunning plan..... |
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Re: HATE
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by tease_whizz on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 12:53:35 PM AEST
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| haha, this is one of the few non-depressing poems i've read on here....i can totally relate. damn computers, they'd rule the world if we'd let them! great write xxx |
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Re: HATE
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 02:47:10 PM AEST
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| You always put a smile on my face wrybod ... thanks :)))) |
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Re: HATE
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 03:18:01 PM AEST
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| Tease-whizz Glad you like it. Have a trawl through the rest of my stuff very little of it is depressiing I try to put smiles on peoples faces. |
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Re: HATE
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 03:22:13 PM AEST
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| DreamWeaver Thanks. I try to read and comment as much as I can but there is so much melancholy I have to give up before I've done half of what I intended. |
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Re: HATE
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 04:27:25 PM AEST
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Mines an IBM & it sucks that is why I cant log in now! MMMMMMMMMMMM WONDER!!!
~Heavenangel~ |
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Re: HATE
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 04:42:28 PM AEST
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| Brothers unite If we don't keep up the HATE they'll take over the world |
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Re: HATE
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by atwojay on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 07:46:03 PM AEST
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| lol I know the feeling so well. I have one little nit-pick: "loose" should be spelled "lose." |
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Re: HATE
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 02:39:50 AM AEST
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atwojay. See what it does to me I get so mad I can't spell. I coulde get Mick to correct it I suppose.Thanks.
Don't you feel sometimes that 'lose' should be spelled 'loose'? After all it doesn't rhyme with 'rose'. On the other hand English spelling as a whole needs rationalising.
It's a great site isn't it? |
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Re: HATE
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 02:42:26 AM AEST
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| Sorry sorry sorry I'm better now.VAL. |
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Re: HATE
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 03:47:56 AM AEST
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atwojay. On second thoughts I meant it in the sense of an involuntary discharge (as of an arrow or gun) i.e. the work went speeding off into Cyberspace, in which case the spelling is correct.
Thank you anyway for deigning to sample and comment on my unworthy 'morsel' (grovel grovel, fawn fawn oh what I'll do not to upset people) |
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Re: HATE
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by M on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 11:25:09 AM AEST
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| haha! i love it, it made me laugh and smile (woohoo), i hate computers some times, other times, they let me read lush poetry like this! |
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Re: HATE
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 02:08:27 PM AEST
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They only let you read lush (I like that word) things to keep their power over you..........
Did tou read Hate II?
You might like a few of mine mostly light hearted tongue in cheek stuff.. Thanks for the kind words.. |
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Re: HATE
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 02:34:00 AM AEST
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ROFL... i can't even rhyme, i'm laughing so hard...
wonderful poem... :) |
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Re: HATE
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 08:28:23 PM AEST
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Glad you liked the verse an'all
drives me up the ruddy wall****** |
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Re: HATE
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by etherealgurl on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 02:24:03 AM AEST
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| awesome! Love it! |
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Re: HATE
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 03:08:52 AM AEST
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| IT'S ALWAYS DOING IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: HATE
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 03:42:05 PM AEST
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Oh how I emphasize with this.
I was disconnected already the moment I got only-line about 15 to 20 times.
I too felt like using a hammer and smashing the whole thing.
Bless you for speaking up.
Emphasize deeply
Elizabeth Dandy |
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Re: HATE
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 08:03:35 PM AEST
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I think there's a built in assumption that it costs you money to stay on line. If you are not active it thinks it's doing you a favour to go off line. Then when you go to the next phase in your calculations you get "page cannot be found" AAAAAAArrrrrgh.
I pay £10 a month for unlimited access. I wish I could tell the bloody machine that.
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Re: HATE
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by norm on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 03:26:04 PM AEST
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Short and sweet and to the point...
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Oh, I love you carpenters,
with hammers, things to fill
If you want the Dell to work
You pay electric bill.
If after pay, it still does lay,
then I would really twitch
I'll lay you odds it's not the set
It merely is the switch.
If not the bill and not the switch
I know not what to think,
If now I'm asked to render thought
I'd say the Dell doth Sti......
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Re: HATE
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 03:52:45 AM AEST
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It's just that it has this idea
I pay by the minute, OK fine.......
so when it thinks I'm not needing
it takes me back off line
sometimes I can recover
on the back button it's still there
but other times it isn't
and I really tare my hair. |
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Re: HATE
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:30:37 PM AEST
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| id personally get a wrecking ball for my compaq, of course when i have another computer, which will be never, ahh. |
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