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[sid] => 114831
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Gave Up
[time] => 2006-02-14 21:09:08
[hometext] => This is one of those messed up situations i find myself in
[bodytext] => I had given up on us The words you now spoke were not words of consolation but of lost hopes We thought it had completely ended We both had a fondness for others Even though mine did not compare to my feelings for you I was trying You told me to try to move on And yet you also hope that I was holding on to us You get frustrated at my indecisiveness yet I am frustrated for the same reason I’m scared you will change your mind when it is too late for me I’m scared you love someone other than me I had lost hope for us I took off my ring of representation for us and locked it away I refused thought of possibility because you pushed them away When you told me of another chance I couldn’t comprehend it I thought all hope was gone, banished to the winds I was so excited at the thought yet in despair for I am with another Will it work out? I doubt it but you told me to try I’m scared to lose you and yet I’m scared to have you What will I do with us? Did I kill all hope by being scared? Will the other understand that I don’t feel the same? Will he understand he doesn’t have the attention to give that I need? Simple gestures of connection not there? What am I to do? I gave up and now I have a chance Will I squander it away or take it and run? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 267 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Lyssa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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