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[sid] => 114824
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Critizism
[time] => 2006-02-14 18:10:17
[hometext] =>
[bodytext] => I hate critizism because your expected to be the best. When your not youre with the bad and theyre considered to be the rest. you try and try to get to the top. Until someone who doesnt care just pushes you off one second at the top you feel invinsiable you fell youre at the bottom youre not noticed, your invisable your soul is missing its gone now your like an secret thats out your bleeding but there is no wound. looking up at the top wondering who took your place. util you only see you spirit standing critizising your invisible face. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 21 [informant] => jada [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
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