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Array ( [sid] => 114768 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In My Mind (Nothing I Can Do About it) [time] => 2006-02-13 20:53:17 [hometext] => hey this is my first poem. Enjoy! As I riting it... and please Read & Review (R&R) [bodytext] => Sitting on the floor
Trying to pick up the pieces that fell
And put them back togther again...
After the picture torn
Trying to figure out the big pictures meaning and more
Waiting for the door to open wide
Waiting for you to arrive
Waiting to be face to face
And eye to eye
But in my heart I know that will never happen
In a million years
You could say..
I won't see you tomorrow or today
In my mind- I am screaming
In my mind- my heart is bleeding
Nothing I can do about it
In my dreams- I am trying to run as fast i can to you
But out of nowhere a tree falls and blocks my way thru
No how i can go around it
Nothing i can do about it
Blink my eyes......
I am back from where i start
Still not knowing where you are.
wish you were here so my unhappiness hidden inside me will vanish
Take my hand
And my problems banish
In my mind- i am screaming
in my mind- my heart is bleeding
NOTHING I CAN DO ABOUT IT!!!

NOTE: THIS WAS NOT COPIED OR PASTED FROM NO LYRICS OF SOMEONE ELSE>>> THIS IS ALL WORKS OF ME!!!! IF U WANT TO BORROW THESE WORDS EMAIL OR IM ME THT IS ALL!!!!

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In My Mind (Nothing I Can Do About it)

Contributed by DeViLQuEeN on Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 08:53:17 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Sitting on the floor
Trying to pick up the pieces that fell
And put them back togther again...
After the picture torn
Trying to figure out the big pictures meaning and more
Waiting for the door to open wide
Waiting for you to arrive
Waiting to be face to face
And eye to eye
But in my heart I know that will never happen
In a million years
You could say..
I won't see you tomorrow or today
In my mind- I am screaming
In my mind- my heart is bleeding
Nothing I can do about it
In my dreams- I am trying to run as fast i can to you
But out of nowhere a tree falls and blocks my way thru
No how i can go around it
Nothing i can do about it
Blink my eyes......
I am back from where i start
Still not knowing where you are.
wish you were here so my unhappiness hidden inside me will vanish
Take my hand
And my problems banish
In my mind- i am screaming
in my mind- my heart is bleeding
NOTHING I CAN DO ABOUT IT!!!

NOTE: THIS WAS NOT COPIED OR PASTED FROM NO LYRICS OF SOMEONE ELSE>>> THIS IS ALL WORKS OF ME!!!! IF U WANT TO BORROW THESE WORDS EMAIL OR IM ME THT IS ALL!!!!

Copyright © DeViLQuEeN ... [ 2006-02-13 20:53:17]
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Re: In My Mind (Nothing I Can Do About it) (User Rating: 1 )
by Channing on Wednesday, 11th April 2007 @ 12:46:04 AM AEST
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Full of pain, very sad. ..

-Channing-

Re: In My Mind (Nothing I Can Do About it) (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 01:42:48 PM AEST
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as your first poem, good job. i hope the sadness has gone away. thank you for sharing.

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