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Eyes of crystal ice shining deep from in your eyes
Wondered how could I've missed you ever since I 1st met u
Remember when we were little we laughed and made fun of ppl
Only ended being best friends with your older brother
Now its seems our love is back but
Lets ask God for advice how to act
For nothing in this world will ever work out on our backs
Back to Him we should always go
But wait and see which way we should go
Thank God I ran into u again
Keep hoping and praying that God allows our love to act
In a way that His love always watches our back

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Young Beauty

Contributed by packatack on Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 07:41:54 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

O Amazing young lady u look so beautiful tonite
Eyes of crystal ice shining deep from in your eyes
Wondered how could I've missed you ever since I 1st met u
Remember when we were little we laughed and made fun of ppl
Only ended being best friends with your older brother
Now its seems our love is back but
Lets ask God for advice how to act
For nothing in this world will ever work out on our backs
Back to Him we should always go
But wait and see which way we should go
Thank God I ran into u again
Keep hoping and praying that God allows our love to act
In a way that His love always watches our back

Copyright © packatack ... [ 2006-02-13 07:41:54]
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Re: Young Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 02:43:30 PM AEST
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Amen, yes pray on it, God will let your heart know, listen carefully. wonderful poem.. since we only have eyes that see others eyes.. for we can only see ourselves from our clavicle down, unless we check ourselves out in a mirror... its nice to use that second set of eyes.. to see our eyes and theirs... our heart.. raquelleah

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