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Array ( [sid] => 114700 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => New light of a new day [time] => 2006-02-12 15:34:21 [hometext] => i finally got an idea to write something YAY!! [bodytext] => Dreams we all have
drifting in and out of sleep
sifting through our minds
our won fears we hide

hoping on the new morn'
the light shines in
through the window open up the door
let it go set it free
before it eats all of you

Phases of life pass on by
Don't give in
don't let up
cry no more for what is lost
but smile for what is given to us today

**JENNI** [comments] => 9 [counter] => 293 [topic] => 19 [informant] => PhantomVampyress [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

New light of a new day

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 03:34:21 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Dreams we all have
drifting in and out of sleep
sifting through our minds
our won fears we hide

hoping on the new morn'
the light shines in
through the window open up the door
let it go set it free
before it eats all of you

Phases of life pass on by
Don't give in
don't let up
cry no more for what is lost
but smile for what is given to us today

**JENNI**

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Re: New light of a new day (User Rating: 1 )
by shortcut on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 03:36:39 PM AEST
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Jenni-
I love this poem it really hit the mood I am intoday and I enjoyed it very much! Keep it up! Hugs- Rose

Re: New light of a new day (User Rating: 1 )
by sararose1950 on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 06:56:41 PM AEST
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the last stanza hit me deep- needed to read that today- thank you for sharing!!
Peace and Light

Re: New light of a new day (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 10:48:24 PM AEST
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Jenni, I'm with Sarahrose, that last stanza was the ONE. Great write. Peace, Laura

Re: New light of a new day (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 12:46:30 AM AEST
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Life is a trip that is sometimes rocky and sometimes smooth, but I think we should take each day and make the best of it. Each day starts with a clean fresh slate and we can write on it what we wish. Each day is a blessing if we just take the time to look for the best in it. Lovely write.

Smiles,
Rita

Re: New light of a new day (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 02:24:29 AM AEST
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this is an awesome write.
Very wise.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: New light of a new day (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 03:46:11 PM AEST
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Purgatori

This is a wonderful poem full of sunshine and hope.
Each new day is a gift and you show that keenly.

Ps
Don't you hate it when your mind is blank --
and
your pin is full of ink ?

I know the feeling.

Re: New light of a new day (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 08:31:29 PM AEST
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cry no more for what is lost
but smile for what is given to us today

Absolutely beautiful poem.

Hugs,
raquelLeah

Re: New light of a new day (User Rating: 1 )
by DieRomantic on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 06:06:25 PM AEST
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I really like this one.. its my fave ive read so far (though I havent gotten to a lot of them yet) veryyy nice. =]

Re: New light of a new day (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 09:47:56 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem this is, and told with such directness of thought. Your style is in the telling of it itself. I just descovered your other pages so i'll be reading more.

thanks for your comment also
on both poems.

myheartsvoice

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