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Array ( [sid] => 114696 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Solitary Confinement [time] => 2006-02-12 13:41:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I cannot save myself from the thoughts of you.
Your in my mind like a script,
engraved into the cells of my conciounce.
Why cant I run away? running so you can fall off my head.
This is why i'm afraid of love.
It is sickineing how every step I take,
I see you.
There you are, a portrait on my mind,
your face, your life, your smile
Follows me like a hungry plague.

I know it is impossible, I can never have you.
But you are here, right here- always.
as I eat, as I sleep,....as I bleed.
You are here.
Your words run thourgh me like waterfalls,
splashing on my sanity.
Let me wake UP!
So beautiful in every way,
but like a loving thief you steal
my peace away.

Those eyes, they burn your image on my mind,
oh how pathetic it is that evry time
I open these lips, your name slips
through like tired lies.
I was already sinking,
but you have made me sunk.
The iron was heavy when it dropped,
so many lives i have endured,
....I think its time for me to stop.

comments please....

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Solitary Confinement

Contributed by themonk on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 01:41:10 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

I cannot save myself from the thoughts of you.
Your in my mind like a script,
engraved into the cells of my conciounce.
Why cant I run away? running so you can fall off my head.
This is why i'm afraid of love.
It is sickineing how every step I take,
I see you.
There you are, a portrait on my mind,
your face, your life, your smile
Follows me like a hungry plague.

I know it is impossible, I can never have you.
But you are here, right here- always.
as I eat, as I sleep,....as I bleed.
You are here.
Your words run thourgh me like waterfalls,
splashing on my sanity.
Let me wake UP!
So beautiful in every way,
but like a loving thief you steal
my peace away.

Those eyes, they burn your image on my mind,
oh how pathetic it is that evry time
I open these lips, your name slips
through like tired lies.
I was already sinking,
but you have made me sunk.
The iron was heavy when it dropped,
so many lives i have endured,
....I think its time for me to stop.

comments please....

Copyright © themonk ... [ 2006-02-12 13:41:10]
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Re: Solitary Confinement (User Rating: 1 )
by moses on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 07:08:57 PM AEST
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Yes Yes ...Deff. know what your saying here man. Well put together as always Vin...I'm real busy this week sry man, but what you doin over vaca?

Keep up the Amazingness,
-m-o-s

Re: Solitary Confinement (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 11:01:50 PM AEST
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Monk...I liked this one. Several lines in here were very strong.....

"There you are, a portrait on my mind,
your face, your life, your smile
Follows me like a hungry plague."

"I open these lips, your name slips
through like tired lies"

Good stuff man, thanks for sharing, Peace, Laura

Re: Solitary Confinement (User Rating: 1 )
by BSteel on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:41:10 AM AEST
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i must admit i was attracted to the title,
i think its pretty good, i like the line hungry plague, a few lines i don't like but overall a strong write,
sincerly,
Bsteel

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