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Array ( [sid] => 114695 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Its all an act [time] => 2006-02-12 13:31:41 [hometext] => feeling one thing but showing something else .... its hard sometimes [bodytext] =>
hurt on inside and out
but with forgiving eyes she smiles

with out a doubt
she goes through trials

but who can help her
she shows no pain

no one is ever sure
no one can tell that shes going insane

she puts on an act
so no one see how she really feels

rumors they will start that's a fact
she has all these emotions but there locked with seals

she cant keep putting on this play
she is about to break

her life gets harder each passing day
but if she tells someone that's putting allot at steak

will she keep it to herself
or will she snap and let all her emotions burst out

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Its all an act

Contributed by hopefades on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 01:31:41 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

hurt on inside and out
but with forgiving eyes she smiles

with out a doubt
she goes through trials

but who can help her
she shows no pain

no one is ever sure
no one can tell that shes going insane

she puts on an act
so no one see how she really feels

rumors they will start that's a fact
she has all these emotions but there locked with seals

she cant keep putting on this play
she is about to break

her life gets harder each passing day
but if she tells someone that's putting allot at steak

will she keep it to herself
or will she snap and let all her emotions burst out

Copyright © hopefades ... [ 2006-02-12 13:31:41]
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Re: Its all an act (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 02:57:12 PM AEST
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pretending and with-holding your feelings can be exhausting not to mention self destructive. i think this is a really good poem and if you feel you have no one to talk to, writing can be the best therapy. Keep it up!

Re: Its all an act (User Rating: 1 )
by geirharald on Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 05:37:39 PM AEST
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`Typical the modern human being ,and i think many people recognize themselves in your words.

Very actually theme.

I like it very mush.

geirharald

Re: Its all an act (User Rating: 1 )
by geirharald on Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 06:42:33 AM AEST
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Re: Its all an act (User Rating: 1)
by geirharald on Tuesday, February 14 2006 @ 17:37:39 CST
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`Typical the modern human being ,and i think many people recognize themselves in your words.

Very actually theme.

I like it very much.

geirharald

Re: Its all an act (User Rating: 1 )
by geirharald on Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 06:44:16 AM AEST
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