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In good times and bad
Love I promised to be true
I want to give all of myself

Love twenty-four hours a day
Good or bad
Love You are always upon my mind
My heart pangs and I pray

Stay with me
Understand when I fail
I love Your Love
Don't You ever leave

I promise to honor and love
Without You where would I be
I am strong then I am weak
Your Love is my treasure trove

It is I
Love You never hurt
In my weakess please forgive
Ever to lose You surly I die

Love You are my reason
Forgive me
For I know I have hurt
My Love my Love that is my sin

O'God help me see
I need You I love You
Be by my side and always near
Forgive even those who have hurt me

Bless them
Jesus You are my Love
My Lord my God my King
Be always at my side

Amen

Sinned

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Love

Contributed by Sinned on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 06:25:53 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

In sickness and in health
In good times and bad
Love I promised to be true
I want to give all of myself

Love twenty-four hours a day
Good or bad
Love You are always upon my mind
My heart pangs and I pray

Stay with me
Understand when I fail
I love Your Love
Don't You ever leave

I promise to honor and love
Without You where would I be
I am strong then I am weak
Your Love is my treasure trove

It is I
Love You never hurt
In my weakess please forgive
Ever to lose You surly I die

Love You are my reason
Forgive me
For I know I have hurt
My Love my Love that is my sin

O'God help me see
I need You I love You
Be by my side and always near
Forgive even those who have hurt me

Bless them
Jesus You are my Love
My Lord my God my King
Be always at my side

Amen

Sinned

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Re: Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 09:18:02 AM AEST
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Amen
Jesus is the King of love. If it were not for Him, we would grievously fail in our loving.
"When I am weak I am strong" - (Saint Paul)
who glories of his weakness.
Hang on to Jesus and your love will bloom and bring blessing.What a moving poem. Thanks Dennis for reminding us of who is to be given precedence in all loving.

Blessings
Elizabeth

Re: Love (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 06:09:33 PM AEST
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wow this is very powerful.. beautiful write.. i enjoyed this thanks for sharing.

JENNI

Re: Love (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 02:14:42 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. I like how you put amen at the end of your poems but to me they are much more then just words they are prayers that are filled with such tenderness and love that makes it them beautiful.. I like this it really touched me and i enjoed reading this piece.

Take care
christina

Re: Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 02:00:45 PM AEST
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Wow this is really beautiful. This is a true poem too. It was really nice to read this thanks for posting this.

Take care.

Scott

Re: Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 09:50:48 PM AEST
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A deep and very heartfelt write Dennis. One is never ever disappointed after visiting ur pages. I'm so sorry I am behind on reading ur writes my friend. I shall be sure to catch up on them. Keep penning such great writes dearest Dennis. Well done.
*warm hugs*
~sue~

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