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Array ( [sid] => 114680 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All Alone It Feels Sometimes [time] => 2006-02-12 06:12:24 [hometext] => jes spitted out, sometimes it feels like this all the time [bodytext] => Walking thru this wilderness type hut
Lotta ppl celebrating feasts and parties
Nobody says a word to ya for its all about over
Wanna talk to someone but something holding ya back
Shades of glare jes staring towards ya eyes
No life inside them eering looking eyes
All alone again jes hoping to die
But no no no I can't cuz i don't wanna die alone
EVeryday it feels alot worse
My best friends boy doesn't even wanna look at ya
A toy I bought for him he jes threw it in the trash
Dang man how long will this loneliness last
I know it can't be like this till i'm old
Please Lord God help me out here in the cold
I know you can change a life forever in harmony and love
Loneliness is something that a person should'nt ever uphold

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All Alone It Feels Sometimes

Contributed by packatack on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 06:12:24 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Walking thru this wilderness type hut
Lotta ppl celebrating feasts and parties
Nobody says a word to ya for its all about over
Wanna talk to someone but something holding ya back
Shades of glare jes staring towards ya eyes
No life inside them eering looking eyes
All alone again jes hoping to die
But no no no I can't cuz i don't wanna die alone
EVeryday it feels alot worse
My best friends boy doesn't even wanna look at ya
A toy I bought for him he jes threw it in the trash
Dang man how long will this loneliness last
I know it can't be like this till i'm old
Please Lord God help me out here in the cold
I know you can change a life forever in harmony and love
Loneliness is something that a person should'nt ever uphold

Copyright © packatack ... [ 2006-02-12 06:12:24]
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Re: All Alone It Feels Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 11:27:36 AM AEST
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Good write, friend.
wise u r.
huggs,
emy

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