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Array ( [sid] => 114670 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In My Minds Eye [time] => 2006-02-11 23:18:09 [hometext] => So I had to write something for English... But even this isnt for a teachers eyes, But I dont know... It is sad and its how My life would have been... [bodytext] => In my minds eye
I watch that child
all alone
I watch her cry.

In my minds eye
I watch him touch her
All alone she cries
Makes herself bleed again.

In my minds eye
I see them
high again
and she tries to run again.

In my minds eye
I watch her grow
not to a woman;
but an unwanted child.

In my minds eye
she breaks down
lieing on her back
willingly now.

In my minds eye
she lays there
not with one,
but with many men.

In my minds eye
she must be high
just so she can do this job
again and again.

In my minds eye
she takes another hit
sniffs another line
lays with another guy.

In my minds eye
she cries again
slits her wrists again
gets high again.

In my minds eye
she ends her life
that which never
even began.

Outside my minds eye
I live this life
away from the future
I was meant to live in.

I live a life that wasn't meant to begin.

Emily Dryden
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In My Minds Eye

Contributed by Shattered_soul on Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 11:18:09 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

In my minds eye
I watch that child
all alone
I watch her cry.

In my minds eye
I watch him touch her
All alone she cries
Makes herself bleed again.

In my minds eye
I see them
high again
and she tries to run again.

In my minds eye
I watch her grow
not to a woman;
but an unwanted child.

In my minds eye
she breaks down
lieing on her back
willingly now.

In my minds eye
she lays there
not with one,
but with many men.

In my minds eye
she must be high
just so she can do this job
again and again.

In my minds eye
she takes another hit
sniffs another line
lays with another guy.

In my minds eye
she cries again
slits her wrists again
gets high again.

In my minds eye
she ends her life
that which never
even began.

Outside my minds eye
I live this life
away from the future
I was meant to live in.

I live a life that wasn't meant to begin.

Emily Dryden

Copyright © Shattered_soul ... [ 2006-02-11 23:18:09]
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Re: In My Minds Eye (User Rating: 1 )
by Packatack on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 06:23:09 AM AEST
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wow good one, i liked it...i hope and pray that everything works out for you
thanks for sharing

Re: In My Minds Eye (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 07:47:11 AM AEST
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good job

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