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For you my heart will long,
For you my soul will ever want,
For you can do no wrong.

For you my lips will never touch,
My arms will never hold,
And yet for you I have no fear,
And am forever bold.

For you my eyes will ever weep,
My heart not far behind,
For you, my love, shall always be
Forever on my mind.

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Longing

Contributed by the_writing_on_my_wall on Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 08:23:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Of you my mind will ever think,
For you my heart will long,
For you my soul will ever want,
For you can do no wrong.

For you my lips will never touch,
My arms will never hold,
And yet for you I have no fear,
And am forever bold.

For you my eyes will ever weep,
My heart not far behind,
For you, my love, shall always be
Forever on my mind.

the writing on my wall

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Re: Longing (User Rating: 1 )
by Te on Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 08:47:41 PM AEST
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it was very cute

Re: Longing (User Rating: 1 )
by the_writing_on_my_wall on Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 08:54:50 PM AEST
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Thank you
It has a whole lot of meaning for me and I am glad to hear that others like it

Re: Longing (User Rating: 1 )
by brittaney on Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 09:07:43 PM AEST
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I really like this poem...

Re: Longing (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 09:59:28 PM AEST
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This is beautiful, I long for someone also,

Tell them,

LG

Re: Longing (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 10:01:22 PM AEST
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I cringed a bit when I saw the other comment that called this "cute". By title alone... I don't think I could use that word to describe this.

It is... lovely... painfully so. It is somewhat brief - but in this particular piece, I find the brevity quite wonderful. The flow is perfect and the expression beautiful... but it is the simple, straightforward, undeniable longing embedded here that moves me the most.

Nicely done!
~Snemmy

Re: Longing (User Rating: 1 )
by the_writing_on_my_wall on Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 10:02:17 PM AEST
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I have...

Re: Longing (User Rating: 1 )
by the_writing_on_my_wall on Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 10:15:00 PM AEST
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yeah so I had written this for my first high school crush, even though im still in high school, but she never so much as gave me a second glace, it was in ninth grade

Re: Longing (User Rating: 1 )
by the_writing_on_my_wall on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 11:46:39 AM AEST
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well, it would seem i posted the wrong description, this poem was written two weeks ago about one of my friends whom does not know my true feelings, the poem i had described, i yet to have put it up, but i was typing it into an away message so i was thinking of that one when i wrote the description

Re: Longing (User Rating: 1 )
by the_writing_on_my_wall on Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 10:48:49 PM AEST
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Okay I lied,
I was really for my high school crush, who i now happen to be dating, but i wanted this other girl to believe it was about her cause we were dating before... Make any Sense?

Re: Longing (User Rating: 1 )
by SmartBlonde on Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 07:10:22 PM AEST
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hahaha, oh, the complications of high school relationships...
but it all worked out in the end. : )

i really like this poem, too.

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